>Ww<Great, well written, meow~ Come on! That's all
Shasha, my grasshopper, your writing is good, it's just about the speed, speed - you're not talking about HP~~ Your plot is good, but the details and actions are lacking in description. The clothes are also good~~ Character description~~ Come on++
>Ww<Great, well written, meow~ Come on! That's all
Shasha, my grasshopper, your writing is good, it's just about the speed, speed - you're not talking about HP~~ Your plot is good, but the details and actions are lacking in description. The clothes are also good~~ Character description~~ Come on++
Well written, keep up the good work!