If the Xue family in Dream of the Red Chamber had a promising second son, and if Xue Pan were no longer the "Dumb Tyrant" of the original... how would the story change? Could the pitiable women find another way to live? As for the bunch of wastrels in the Jia family, Xue Chi says: "I can only sweep the snow in front of my own door. I can't worry about the frost on someone else's roof."
This story has a golden finger and BL romance. If that's not your thing, don't read. The Jia family will be bashed, though they weren't exactly innocent to begin with. ╮(╯▽╰)╭
This is just fanfiction written to indulge in wish fulfillment. Canon purists, please go easy on me.
The editor has informed me that this story will go VIP on December 24. Thank you all for your support. There will be three chapters on the day it goes VIP. If you've reposted this before, please delete the posts and take them down.
P.S. I know this is a little rushed. It's finals season, and I've been completely swamped. Whether or not you subscribe from now on, thank you all for your support. ╮(╯3╰)╭
A small revision for the current censorship climate.
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First of all, I would like to ask the author to forgive me for being rude. After all, this is my personal opinion. I have always been committed to watching Danmei sweet novels, but occasionally I was criticized and felt depressed, and I had to express my displeasure. The Red Mansion itself is already very tragic, so when I read The Red Mansion, I just hope that the original character will have a good ending, regardless of body or mind. However, the first two-thirds of this article have a lot of gold fingers. It can be said that there are many unreasonable things compared to ancient times. I just think it is a fiction. The protagonist has a green light all the way, and the encounter with the second male lead is also very "little talk". Well, and the second actor's feelings for the protagonist are also very "little talk". Later, I wanted to complain, what was the reason for their marriage? I think it's fantasy. If you change the style of writing, if you are trying to torture readers or something, the tone of the previous article is inappropriate. In fact, the protagonist has very few emotional lines. I found out, I liked it at first, but then suddenly became a scumbag again... If you want to torture, Red Mansion Fans is not a very good topic, at least for me, the fujoshi readers with a "glass heart" who are fans of Red Mansions The biggest problem is that the writing is not strong enough, and the ending is very abrupt. There is no sadistic effect, only diaphragm response. That's right, I, diaphragm response. There are things we can't achieve in reality so we can hope to see a perfect reunion in a novel. Everyone just reads the article for fun, so why write it in a different way? Immortal Fate is not the case, Red Mansions is unreasonable, joy cannot be achieved, abuse is not good... Having said that, I still envy the author. At least he has the courage to write, unlike me, who can only complain. And I believe that writing skills are developed through practice, and authors will always find their own writing style. Finally, I would like to add my apology and give 32 likes to the author for his strong heart. My comments are inappropriate for the article, please don't feel bad... If it still hurts you, I will run away silently... I hope to see better works from the author next time.
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Catching bugs: When Xue Chi quit the Hanlin Academy and asked to be the censor, many people didn't understand him very well - is this Xue Pan?
Every family has its own scriptures that are difficult to recite! I'm not any better than you. My brother-in-law passed away from cancer on the 29th and lost two dogs on the 30th. After searching for 3 hours, luckily they found them. On the 4th day of the lunar month, I heard that two more dogs were suspected of having cancer. People are so fragile.
= =I'm hungry after reading this. . Go find something to eat. . . Crawl away. . . . . . . . . . .
… What should I say? The emperor was mentally retarded to propose marriage to them. It was even worse than Qianlong. I always felt that this was too deceptive, so I decided to say goodbye...
Big, please change it, these two are not worthy~~~~Although Xue Chi is the second son and does not inherit the family business, he is the legitimate son, and he was promoted to an official through his own ability. The daughter born from a concubine is too cheap.
Tanchun is not worthy~~She is a concubine~~How can a concubine match the legitimate son of a general?
This marriage is unreasonable. It was impossible in ancient times to have a top-notch general paired with a concubine who was idle but without title. Yuanchun would not be stupid enough to mention it to the emperor. It is even more impossible for the emperor to agree. This male protagonist is the son of his beloved son. Isn't this a slap in his son's face? The author should change it, and as a time traveler, he would not want to have anything to do with the Jia family. In the past, the male protagonist was afraid that Baochai would be related to the Jia family, so how could he be relieved now because of the proposed marriage?
This cp is embarrassing... Tanchun is not worthy of him…(￣_￣|||)