The Inquest of the Ming Dynasty: A Survival Game Handbook

Inadvertently, it seems that the word count can be used as a long review, so I will simply give it one. I just started to discover this article today, and saved it to read it. There are many places that made me really stop here, and I couldn't help but jump out and complain! Let me embarrass you first, hasn't the heroine ever watched "Avenging the Wrongful Affair"? Or maybe she doesn't know about Song Ci, the famous executioner of the Song Dynasty? ? ? Also, dear, you can write more carefully. I feel that your writing is too hasty, and it feels like going through the motions. Suddenly I saw Song Yi saying that Princess Sian was quick-thinking, had a photographic memory, and cracked N major cases in the capital... This made me speechless. So far, I have only seen the heroine living a life like a running account and so many inexplicable things. The so-called mission is right and wrong... It's just that the main god is the most irresponsible and out-of-touch main god I have ever seen. The life of this heroine is also such a run-down life... (I'm here to complain about it~~~ Our favorite Lord Song Ci, I feel aggrieved for you. It's not your fault that you have become a sidekick. Dear, don't be so complete and stepmother, okay? Don't be so vague?) Also, dear Xiaohai, if this is a romance, be more emotionally detailed. If it is a suspense, please be more detailed on the case. Although those who read the article have actually watched TV, you can re-examine and elaborate on the development of each case from the perspective of the heroine and some details that may not be shown in the TV series to highlight the characteristics of your article and highlight the heroine's IQ! This... Emotionally, it seems that you once said that it was a foreshadowing. So, who is the male protagonist? You should let him interact more with the female protagonist, and make it different. Don't treat them the same as passers-by, A, B, C, and D. Then I don't understand. Is she really here for a visit? If that's the case, dear, then this article really doesn't need a male protagonist. The emotional drama is too weak and fragmented, and you skip too many steps. Many times, I feel that the end of the previous chapter and the beginning of the next chapter are very abrupt and disconnected. Regarding the case, since you are a fan of this ancient suspense drama, in addition to taking care of the emotional aspects, you must also take into account the development and narrative of the case. I don't know what others think of it. I like this type of TV series very much, and what I like about each case in it. If you really write this type of fan, you must make this feature If used well, it is actually very interesting to see and participate in the entire development process of the case from the heroine's own point of view and perspective. Occasionally letting her participate in some thrilling plots will be more interesting. It is much better than the current relationship is unclear and the case is too clear... You have laid so much in front, is it all in vain? ! At least the writing style of this article so far makes me very unhappy. The plot is too loose. Where the description should be detailed, it needs to be clear and organized! That's it for now! It's rare for me to give a long review. I only say this if it really attracts my attention. Don't think I'm verbose! Well, because I am also writing articles in Jinjiang, I am purely detail-oriented. I am picky about details, so I would rather update slowly! Haha~

I don't like this male pig, but everything else is fine

Is it over so soon? ? ?

Stomp your feet! Disgusting, gone again. . . Ask for the following. . .

How come there are so many arrogant people!!! Scholars, farmers, industry and commerce~~Businessmen were the lowest profession in that era~They were so arrogant~arrogant!!

Hurry up and turn this young lady into cannon fodder. . .

I hope there won't be any big twists and turns between the couple!

No, are you going to spill a lot of blood again? ? ?

Thunder has arrived, here comes another cannon fodder

But don't end it hastily!