Reborn with a Baby, on the Road to Fame

What a warm picture, so warm and enviable

It's so happy and perfect, so beautiful

I think if Zinan had told them earlier, grandpa would definitely not have let them wait for five years, because there are little buns? What old man doesn't like children? Of course I like little buns

The adults wrote it beautifully. . I have read both of your final articles. . All right. . Let's talk about my thoughts. . . Both topics are relatively hot, especially for the first one to write an article. . The plot is pretty good, the language is fluent, and everything is described well. . But I feel there are less negative descriptions. . Take this article involving the entertainment industry as an example. . The various questions asked by reporters that are expected in the entertainment industry are not involved at all. Even if the protagonist is low-key, it is impossible that there will be no reporters asking questions. . And it always feels like what happens in the article only involves these protagonists and supporting characters, and has nothing to do with anyone else. When we look at the entertainment industry, we want to see various people's attitudes and evaluations of the protagonist. . And the author didn't write about it at all. This always makes people feel like these people are acting. . It doesn't feel like the entertainment industry at all. . We can't see what kind of status the protagonist has achieved. We only know that he has written many good songs for different reasons, appeared on a variety show, released many albums, held a few concerts, and won a few awards. It doesn't matter. . We don't see him in the spotlight. When the protagonist was about to terminate his contract, it was impossible for any reporter not to know about it. When he was pursued by the prince, it was also impossible not to know about it. And when he later moved to another city, it was impossible not to know about it. But in these places, we did not see any reporters! What are the characteristics of the entertainment industry? Paparazzi, scandals and more. . But the protagonist gave up the scandal for the sake of the prince; then why not leave some paparazzi scenes for us readers. . So that we know that this is indeed the entertainment industry! ! ! I hope that in future articles, the author will allow the protagonist to interact not only with the supporting characters, but also with passers-by A, B, C, D, and the masses. This will make the article more vivid and make us feel that this is indeed another world.

Let's put another episode up

Beauty, why not put up another extra episode today~

This article was finished so quickly~ Let's write about life after marriage~

It's over so soon. I wonder if there will be any extra chapters to write more about the two married lives and Xiaobaozi.

Happy New Year, Big! Reading sweet articles makes me feel so good

Happy New Year, Big! Reading sweet articles makes me feel so good