A quick introduction.
I. [Rumbar Pirates] (Source: Baidu)
Led by Captain Yorki the Flower, this pirate crew from the West Blue had a Western-cowboy flair. They were wiped out by another pirate crew 50 years ago. Their flag showed a skull with horns. The name of their ship is unknown, and its figurehead was shaped like a bull's skull.
II. [Male Lead Yorki] (Source: Baidu)
The captain of the pirate crew Brook once belonged to, nicknamed "Yorki the Flower." He contracted a plague in the Calm Belt and entrusted his future mission entirely to the musician Brook before parting ways with his companions. His fate is unknown.
III. [Female Lead Isa]
A calm heroine with the author's favorite long, straight black hair. She has all the natural traits of a woman, both good and bad, and is dedicated to raising herself into a devoted wife.
The picture I found through Google Images will serve as the character design for Roll for now. Please see the author's note in Chapter 22.
[Plot]
<Childhood friends turned lovers. This pairing cannot be broken up.>
A gentle, down-to-earth romance with plenty of melodrama.
Entirely original plot, centered on raising a devoted wife, a loyal dog, and a perverse captive.
The author's heart is fragile, the writing is very plain, the plot is original, the storytelling is weak, and updates are extremely slow.
Take a look at the man who made me change my mind.
See you again~ Girl, try harder~ Well... You need to be fatter...
Girl, let me point out what you said is unreasonable, because you think I have a vicious tongue~ To be honest, when I saw Luo Er chop off Issa's hand and gouge out her eyeballs... I didn't like him anymore = =! They have been fighting life and death together for so long, and it seems that Luo Er is keen on taking risks, and he can also get the trust and indulgence of the crew of the ship. The most important thing is that he knows how to encourage the crew's fighting spirit. Even if they sailed for so long in vain, the crew did not say anything, which shows that Luo Er is very popular and is also a qualified captain. But since Yuqi came out... Luo Er has been almost destroyed orz He has completely become an extreme and neurotic lunatic. I don't understand how much impact that photo had on Luo Er. As a man, especially a captain who leads a group of pirates, he is not a jealous wife in the harem →_→ He should have the most basic sense. I think Now Luo Er is not taking risks for his dreams, but planning everything to tie up a woman. He puts all his thoughts on Issa and even throws his dreams aside. I feel a bit inconsistent about this. How did Yun Jiangnai want to describe Luo Er before? Luo Er loves adventure, and is a smart leader who knows how to sacrifice for love. He is indeed pursuing Issa, a man who dares to brave volcanoes, a man who loves adventure and is confident and optimistic [wasn't he quite optimistic when he returned to the Twin Gorges earlier?] Why did he change just because of a photo? He put Issa under house arrest because he was afraid that he would escape. How could he be so unconfident? After living and dying together for so long, does he have no trust in his companions at all? Can you imagine that Luffy, who loves adventure, became a psychopath because he was afraid that his lover would be robbed? [Okay, the metaphor is a bit scary, I was shocked...] Well~ Luo Er's image was very good and lovable at first~ but later on I found him so annoying = =... He is not qualified to be a pirate captain! Not even qualified for love!!! I have a lot of resentment towards Luo Er. The character that I liked at the beginning suddenly turned into this. The gap is too big. Yun Jiang gave him the beautiful temperament in the first place [Ugh! ] It was subverted little by little in the back. I felt more and more awkward watching the back. If Yun Jiang is worried about not being able to control the original characters later, he can read what he wrote in the front. Every move can reflect his character and temperament. At least when I write articles, I often run to the front of the page to see if I have forgotten any foreshadowing or the like = = Otherwise, we will forget it after a long time... Hmm... This message is for Luo Er, an original character. I am so angry. Is he still a responsible man?!!! No normal man would become so crazy because of love!!! What's more, as a pirate captain with a leadership position, you have encountered countless situations of life and death decisions. Where is your sanity??!!! Ahem... Okay, I lost my composure. At this point, I realized that I had written more than 800 words. I might as well write more to make up a long review. Congratulations on adding another article to my long review library. It seems that I don't write long reviews for points to read V articles. Every time I complain too much, the number of words is too high = =! In fact, Yun Jiangnai's portrayal of both the male and female protagonists is good, but Luo Er failed a little orz and the structure of the article... I think some transitions are not clear enough and a bit blurry. Sometimes I don't know why I jumped to this point = = So I went back and read it again... The other thing is that this article tends to be bland~ I don't think it's particularly exciting. The ups and downs are too small. Of course, I automatically ignore the ups and downs due to Luo Er. I'm not interested in a man who has such a bad temper. [How much resentment do you have! However, I can still understand it as a short story. Many plots cannot be expanded and the natural ups and downs will be small~ So that's it for the nonsense. Yunjiang, you need to stop for a while and just rethink Luo Er's character issue and unify it, otherwise I'll find it very strange later on. My enthusiasm for the article dropped at the beginning. I finally found an article that I really like. Don't waste the later content. TAT So that's all I can say. What you write next depends on you, Yun-chan~
Luo Er has become abnormal = =… In fact, I'm very curious, why did he suddenly become so nervous... This is not like the behavior of a pirate captain at all. He needs to be a little rational at least, and there is a big gap from the beginning... He also doesn't trust his companions too much. As a member of the Luo Er Pirates, Isa will say goodbye if he really wants to leave. If he doesn't agree with it then, why do he do it just because of a photo...
Luo Er's impression suddenly changed = =… Did you blackmail him orz... I was reading Nai's article in the car at noon, and the car was shaking all the way. I was learning to drive, and the drivers were all novices. The shock made me almost vomit, and I couldn't hold on anymore, so I stopped leaving a message = =... I came back to make up for the points in the evening. Because I felt dizzy after driving all day, I usually lay down on the bed and stretched out my body when I came back, so I made up the points slowly╮(╯_╰)╭
Just hold on! Youqi can't be kicked for no reason!
Feelings come so fast →_→Did they all jump in the middle? Will there be a triangle relationship in the future? To be honest... There is a triangular relationship among the companions on the ship and they all become jealous. I feel awkward because this plot is in a pirate movie... I... Hide my face ~ companions really like friendship...
Cups...-_-!
Why didn't Mauisa go to sea with me →_→
Sure enough, Brooke is still in love~ He will be invited next~~
The girl is so lost~ The kiss was so gentle~