The Sword Stained with Royal Blood Fanfic: It's Time to Wake Up

Is Xia Xueyi a scumbag? This is not something that can be determined in one sentence He is ruthless, yet affectionate He vowed to kill fifty people from the Wen family and rape ten But after meeting Wen Yi, he let go of his hatred Even when he was seriously injured by the enemy, all he thought about was that if he died, Wen Yi would have no one to take care of him. In order not to hurt Wen Yi's father, he put down his sword at the last moment When Wen Yi's father attacked him from behind, he just said, "Go quickly, don't make me regret it." He was so guarded against any food or water brought to him by dozens of members of the Wen family But when Wen Yi served him the lotus seed soup, she was so happy that she drank it without any precautions. When she learned that Wen Yi didn't know that the lotus seed soup was poisonous, she jumped up like a child and was ecstatic. When he was being tortured by He Hongyao, he said He doesn't love He Hongyao not because her face was bitten by a poisonous snake But he never loved He Hongyao at all I don't know how many women he has played with in his life, and how many women he has had sex with But the only thing he cares about is his fiancée His fiancée is beautiful, gentle and innocent He Hongyao whipped him several times in the morning, noon and night, and she broke both of his feet. But still refused to tell Wen Yi's name He was afraid that He Hongyao would hurt her life, and now that his martial arts skills were useless, he could not protect her. Whenever He Hongyao whipped him, he would say Wen Yi was good. Before he died, he was biting Wen Yi's hairpin. Until the muscles fester, I never let go I don't know where my love started, but I love you deeply

What a strange article, the writing is unclear. I think the author wanted to create a plain heroine who is calm, lively and has a bit of personality. But it was really a failure~ We only saw the heroine swallowing her anger, and the highlights of the original red pill were blurred. Moreover, personal pronouns are very confusing. If you want to change them, I suggest you pay attention to segmenting them or using different symbols to mark them. It is really hard to read this article. Now it's Hongyao's perspective, now Meng Bai's perspective, and now it's Xia Xueyi's inner description. It means that it is best to use one person in the main text. If you want to change it, it is recommended to explain it in the extra chapter. But writing is not easy, I hope I can practice more.

To be honest, I really hate this He Hongyao. Although the ending in the original work is tragic, at least it dares to love and hate, with fierce and decisive emotions, and a distinctive and colorful personality. Here she has completely become the little daughter-in-law's doormat. Everyone can look down on her, and she treats everyone with caution and trepidation. She doesn't see the slightest bit of character and perseverance.

Apart from the bright spot of finding a second love, this He Hongyao has nothing outstanding. This Golden Snake is also the most scumbag and badass among the He Hongyao fans I have read so far.

Xiaobai is so cute, much cuter than Golden Snake. Even if the heroine wants to marry her, she still has to find Xiaobai.

I can't see how this He Hongyao is any better than the original one. It's also very sinful for men. Is He Hongyao afraid of death? Even Xia Xueyi was very kind to He Hongyao in the beginning, right?

Why is this Xia Xueyi so shameless!!

The names are changing so much that I feel dizzy.

What else are you doing with dirty dirty shoes... I don't support Xia He's CP!

To be honest, I really hate this He Hongyao. Although the ending in the original work is tragic, at least it dares to love and hate, with fierce and decisive emotions, and a distinctive and colorful personality. Here she has completely become the little daughter-in-law's doormat. Everyone can look down on her, and she treats everyone with caution and trepidation. She doesn't see the slightest bit of character and perseverance.