Pure Land After the Apocalypse

The writing is very innovative, not like the current apocalyptic writings, but the writing is very clear and flowing, and it also has inheritance. The female protagonist has been practicing so much earlier, and she also has space assistance and can adjust time. She is actually not as good as the male protagonist, even the orcs are far behind. . . The most important thing is that it's unfinished. . . . Tangled

Very good, keep up the good work

It's so bad, I'm so angry

I think this article shouldn't be finished yet, right? For example, it was mentioned earlier that the three protagonists robbed a smuggling gang and hid arms and antiques. The heroine also felt that she would encounter that illegal gang again in the future, so why was it not mentioned at all later in the article? Those robbed weapons are no longer in use? Moreover, there are many unreasonable places in the article, such as the abilities of the three protagonists that are sometimes strong and sometimes weak, making it difficult to judge. When we were in Calabash Valley, the strength of the orcs and the beasts outside the valley was described as extremely tyrannical, and when the heroine was preparing to escape, it was surprisingly smooth. According to the author's previous description of strength, it should not have been so smooth. And I have never been able to figure out how humans maintain a "delicate" balance with the intelligent and powerful orcs? The so-called final chapter ignores the process of human beings going from being completely weak to gradually being able to survive on the earth after the mutation. It also simply describes the protagonist becoming the top master among human beings. It feels like this change is sudden and lacks foreshadowing. It is even more ridiculous to decide to travel around the world because of my own strength and alignment, which hinders my younger brother's future. Generally speaking, it gives the impression that the author laid out some plots at the beginning, and then due to various reasons, was unable to grasp these plots well and ended in a hurry. It really makes people...

Actually! I don't like Li Bin's character. As the saying goes, no one is perfect. This is true, but this character is too one-sided. But the heroine can do it, and the storyline can do it. Like it 1

The writing is very good, but there is too little. It took me a long time to read it. I hope there will be more.

The article is quite innovative, I hope it won't be a trap, I can't afford to hurt the people squatting at the bottom of the trap~

Come on

It's very interesting. Just write your own article and let others talk about it. If some people don't want to watch it, just don't watch it. Why do you always find fault with others?

Looking forward to the update. Come on