I think he should be a chivalrous and righteous hero.
The male protagonist Lin Bu is not good enough. Please change the male protagonist. Zhao is definitely not good. The female protagonist only gets together with Stallion when she is popular. There is no attractive man who is very infatuated and devoted to the female protagonist. The male protagonist Lin Bu is really bad.
When I saw the introduction to this chapter, I suddenly remembered the plot...
Xiangyu: You are ruthless, you are shameless, you are unreasonable
Lao Bai: You are not heartless, you are not shameless, you are not unreasonable
Xiangyu: Where am I ruthless, shameless and unreasonable?
Lao Bai: Where are you not ruthless, where are you not shameless, where are you not unreasonable
Xiangyu: No matter how ruthless, shameless or unreasonable I am, I will never be more ruthless, shameless or unreasonable than you.
Lao Bai: Then I will show you how ruthless, shameless and unreasonable you are.
Xiangyu: I finally admit that I am ruthless, shameless and unreasonable.
Lao Bai: Even if I am ruthless, shameless and unreasonable, I was forced out by you being ruthless, shameless and unreasonable.
It was freezing cold. It's not easy to be a mobile phone party
Hehe. I've posted so much. You should take a closer look
Why are there no words in the first three chapters when I open them?
Sprinkle flowers~(>^ω^<)
I wonder what new opportunities Ruyu will have
To be honest, when I saw this, I couldn't stand it anymore and couldn't help but want to take some pictures.
This should be a place designed to be tortured, but I was not tortured at all but broke into cold sweat~~~~(>_<)
I've always been fascinated by the cousin plot that appears in almost every time-travel novel, but I have to write about misunderstandings and do it like this = =Lin, who never married the heroine in history, knows that she can't guess whether this fiancée is real or fake?!
[Bishui will receive articles and comments in December]:
Writing style: The writing style feels quite tame, but this is also because it is written for such a character, such as playing music, chess, calligraphy, painting, and various acrobatic arts. Anyway, it just feels like it is quite "soft". I always feel like I can't write enough. Always trapped in a small corner, without a sense of atmosphere.
Plot: Well, time travel and time travel again, the heroine's reaction is still okay. Although the causes and consequences of time travel are not there, it is understandable. After all, it seems that "travel is restricted" now. However, I always felt that the side branches of the plot were a bit cumbersome and the relationship with the main plot was not very clear. This caused me to be a little doubtful about whether the male protagonist was Mr. Lin.
Characters: In terms of characters, I always think that the heroine is a little bit charming. It seems that not to mention the men who appear since her appearance. Even the maid thinks that the heroine is so beautiful, virtuous and embarrassing. This = =Of course it is not impossible for others to highlight the beauty of the heroine, but if the frequency is too high, the heroine will appear to be too charming.
[The above only represents my own opinion]
I think he should be a chivalrous and righteous hero.
The male protagonist Lin Bu is not good enough. Please change the male protagonist. Zhao is definitely not good. The female protagonist only gets together with Stallion when she is popular. There is no attractive man who is very infatuated and devoted to the female protagonist. The male protagonist Lin Bu is really bad.
When I saw the introduction to this chapter, I suddenly remembered the plot... Xiangyu: You are ruthless, you are shameless, you are unreasonable Lao Bai: You are not heartless, you are not shameless, you are not unreasonable Xiangyu: Where am I ruthless, shameless and unreasonable? Lao Bai: Where are you not ruthless, where are you not shameless, where are you not unreasonable Xiangyu: No matter how ruthless, shameless or unreasonable I am, I will never be more ruthless, shameless or unreasonable than you. Lao Bai: Then I will show you how ruthless, shameless and unreasonable you are. Xiangyu: I finally admit that I am ruthless, shameless and unreasonable. Lao Bai: Even if I am ruthless, shameless and unreasonable, I was forced out by you being ruthless, shameless and unreasonable.
It was freezing cold. It's not easy to be a mobile phone party
Hehe. I've posted so much. You should take a closer look
Why are there no words in the first three chapters when I open them?
Sprinkle flowers~(>^ω^<)
I wonder what new opportunities Ruyu will have
To be honest, when I saw this, I couldn't stand it anymore and couldn't help but want to take some pictures. This should be a place designed to be tortured, but I was not tortured at all but broke into cold sweat~~~~(>_<) I've always been fascinated by the cousin plot that appears in almost every time-travel novel, but I have to write about misunderstandings and do it like this = =Lin, who never married the heroine in history, knows that she can't guess whether this fiancée is real or fake?!
[Bishui will receive articles and comments in December]: Writing style: The writing style feels quite tame, but this is also because it is written for such a character, such as playing music, chess, calligraphy, painting, and various acrobatic arts. Anyway, it just feels like it is quite "soft". I always feel like I can't write enough. Always trapped in a small corner, without a sense of atmosphere. Plot: Well, time travel and time travel again, the heroine's reaction is still okay. Although the causes and consequences of time travel are not there, it is understandable. After all, it seems that "travel is restricted" now. However, I always felt that the side branches of the plot were a bit cumbersome and the relationship with the main plot was not very clear. This caused me to be a little doubtful about whether the male protagonist was Mr. Lin. Characters: In terms of characters, I always think that the heroine is a little bit charming. It seems that not to mention the men who appear since her appearance. Even the maid thinks that the heroine is so beautiful, virtuous and embarrassing. This = =Of course it is not impossible for others to highlight the beauty of the heroine, but if the frequency is too high, the heroine will appear to be too charming. [The above only represents my own opinion]