Sky, live well! With these words echoing in my mind, I fainted!
When I woke up again, I was already in the hospital. Wait, hospital? It's not like this!
"You're awake!" The blond hair stung my eyes.
Dad's hair is golden too!
"What's your name?"
I am silent.
"Haha! What's on your mind? It'll make you feel better if you tell me!"
I'm still silent.
Minato probably knew I wouldn't answer, so he simply didn't say anything and stayed silent with me.
After a long while, I said, "Can you... Tell me where this is?"
"This is the Konoha Ninja Village of the Land of Fire!"
Ninja? Could it be Naruto?
Well! Now that you've come, make peace with it!
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My other pitfalls:
==Author: How old are you? I must be criticized for writing such an article when I am in junior high school. How can the level of junior high school be so low? [Hold fist] I have read countless Naruto fanfics. The worst thing is that there are no idioms in one chapter and there are countless typos. The best thing is that there are a lot of advanced words in the article that I cannot understand at my level. Yours should belong to It's about moderate, but I still think it's a bit on the low side. The author should keep up the good work. I'm helpless with your writing, but the one you recommended "[Naruto: Itachi] Through the Years" is pretty good. It is indeed second only to Ran Sheng's "Itachi Doujin". This should be an advanced type of writing. Okay, I admit it. In fact, I specifically find shortcomings in fan fiction and criticize it. I am not very good at praising, so I won't talk nonsense. In short, the text is not very good and needs to be improved. Also, here I would like to share my thoughts on Mary Sue. The article must have a Mary Sue, because all Mary Sues have the following points: Family history 1 13. You have a key influence in the plot and have an important status. 14. You are popular with almost everyone. 15. You are absolutely vulnerable in front of powerful characters. 16. You are very attracted to the opposite sex. 17. You are very gay 18. You have a mortal enemy 19. You sacrificed your life to save someone. 20. You die in the arms of a character you like. 21. A character you liked was held by you when he died. 22. Then you bite the tofu of a certain character to the end Therefore, it is very difficult to do without Mary Sues. No, it is completely impossible to do so. So those who are anti-Soviet should just stop reading novels. There are no articles about Mary Sues. In a time-travel fanfic, if you don't have a Mary Sue, you can't have a relationship with the protagonist, but how can you continue writing a fanfic without a relationship? So it's completely impossible. And in those romance novels, the heroine is either beautiful and attracted by the hero, or she has a unique personality. Which one of them is not a Mary Sue? Okay, end of the point. Authors, please don't be influenced by Mary Sues. Just write as much as you like, preferably with beautiful words, which you are lacking now!
Looking forward to the update. Can the author greatly speed up the update? It's hard to win readers' favor if you update weekly!
= = By the way, the Zi family's library is overflowing...
Damn it, Xiao Wu is in trouble again! Aren't you tired? Before one is finished, another pit comes. I warn you not to give up, otherwise the consequences will be serious, you know