The Neighborhood

The first few chapters were pretty good, and I had a bit of a feeling. Unfortunately, there were some frequent person changes in the later chapters, which ruined the flow of the whole text and made people feel a little dizzy. In addition, due to space limitations in short stories, the plot must be fully explained, otherwise the emotions will appear to be abrupt and inexplicable. All in all, it's difficult to write. You have more courage than me

The first few chapters were pretty good, and I had a bit of a feeling. Unfortunately, there were some frequent person changes in the later chapters, which ruined the flow of the whole text and made people feel a little dizzy. In addition, due to space limitations in short stories, the plot must be fully explained, otherwise the emotions will appear to be abrupt and inexplicable. All in all, it's difficult to write. You have more courage than me

Nice looking! Please continue to work hard, adults!

So funny! Such embarrassment

I didn't expect it to be a mutual attack.

So cute and warm

A typical example of someone with a thief heart but no courage.

Why are you acting so wifely?

Good review, dear! All 2 points

Very interesting, plus points