Beneath the Chang'an Moon, I Ask Your Heart

. . . I don't know what to say. I feel like it's written very strangely.

Received. Come on!

According to the local accent, it's not a girl but a woman

Two questions: 1. Xianyang International Airport 2. There was no Wanda Hilton in 2008, it was only built last year

Two questions: 1. Xianyang International Airport 2. There was no Wanda Hilton in 2008, it was only built last year

Girl, please go to chapter 185 in the shop to get the review, thank you for your hard work~

00 The copywriter really doesn't know what he's talking about. I'm sorry for you QAQ 01 In fact, I quite like that dynasty. It was not a beautiful dynasty and it was not as popular as the Qing Dynasty, but it could almost be called a legend. My understanding of that dynasty only comes from a few words in books, so I will not comment on Yuwen. 02 I like the word Chang'an very much, not the city. When I read these two words, I will feel a quiet and happy feeling. 03 Moli Moli, these two words are really common and I will say them. Orz Every time I see these two words, I have the illusion of seeing a pear blossom blooming in Chongyun. She calls you "Don't leave", but after all, she will never leave you. There are few capable people who live up to their names, but there are many who do not live up to their names. 04 Your first chapter made me want to give it a thumbs up. I won't complain about the setting of the second-generation daughter's family discord, but what a fuss about that rush of things as if to show off one's superiority. [Face covering Your description of the scenery is good, but I didn't see any information at all in your first chapter except that she likes Yuwen very much. Just jot down the things before the time travel. It doesn't need to be so much. Even if the heroine's family background is used in the future, it can still appear in the memories. 05 The research party... This person who can only do research on a whim looks up. 06 [When Mo Li heard this in the room, she hated that man even more. It wasn't that he had dominated the government for many years and made Yu Wenyong a puppet emperor. In addition to his arrogance, why did the Zhou Dynasty fall to that point? It was all because of this man, the man she wanted to go to hell most. I can say that I don't understand this part of history at all, so I can't understand it at all. Historical novels and the like are just like fan fiction. Not only people who have read it are reading it, but people who haven't read it are also reading it. With this sentence, you can properly introduce that period of history, or briefly explain what 'that person' did. 07 The progress of the article is a bit strange, the conscription is too abrupt... You described the village as so harmonious and happy, and the old woman's words did not reveal such a tendency. If you are going to do conscription, at least explain the current background. Thank you, just don't let this paragraph appear so abrupt. If you are someone who has never read this period of history, some of the author's words above will be very misleading to readers. 08 You are new. = = It's pretty good for a newcomer to be able to write 12W when the writing is so cold. It will be fine after surviving the coldest period of time. But if you want to be popular... I'm sorry, I don't know how to do it hehehe. The first article of this guy is not finished at all. It would be great to finish the first article. 09 [I really can't bear to part with you, Li Qiye, you are always like this, giving others a glimmer of hope, but then quickly taking it back. It's really selfish. After all, she is still a selfish person. She is really selfish. She doesn't need others to tell her. She knows it herself, but a stubborn person like her is someone who knows she is wrong but never repented. This paragraph... Is really shocking. = = Character analysis like this is somewhat unnecessary. What the heroine does is originally quite smooth, but adding a paragraph here changes the flavor. And if you really want to shape a person, you have to leave an impression on the readers bit by bit through some small actions and the handling of some things. 10 Your writing skills are pretty good. There won't be much of a problem with the rest of it. Just write more. By the way, I'd like to mention... Revise the first few chapters. Really. QAQ A good beginning is the most important factor in attracting readers... So come on girl, as the old saying goes, men are generally quite cold! Illegal gathering at Chang Ping Pu. By:

Ouch, ouch, ouch, ouch. . . . Kill kill kill kill kill kill! A hundred times to watch and a hundred times to torture.

It's so beautiful, so wonderful. But again, I felt very unhappy when Mo Xu was abused. If it were me, I would kill all his concubines first, then kill him, and then commit suicide! Cheek puffs...

Yu Wenyong is so hateful! ! ! ! ! If I were Mo Xu, I would first kill Li Mozi with one knife, kill Yu Wenyong with the same knife, and then commit suicide. We don't want to be born on the same day, but we want to die on the same day!