Comprehensive Missions

Um... The tutoring part... I don't understand...

Maybe not bad. This article. . But here it means that I don't understand. . .

New work. . . . . Applause first.

I feel like it's better not to use it… I generally think that NP, harem, etc. Are all Mary Suuwen... You probably don't want to write this kind of article = = And don't you think that if you take him into the heroine's harem? Does it feel a bit... Pedophile? - - I think Bai Tongzi has been around 10 years old... And no matter how young the heroine is, she can't be younger than about 15 years old... [But... If you calculate it this way, it shouldn't be considered a pedophile, but probably a sibling... (←Hey, I'm off topic!)]

I think it would be better to change the "□□" to "China"... First, I remember the history class teacher said that the word "□□" shows the arrogance of the Chinese people during the feudal period [probably = = I can't remember what I learned before... Second, I feel that saying "□□" to foreigners in the 21st century... Has a kind of old-fashioned feeling. Isn't China bad? Third, it really feels a bit awkward when I look at it = = Well~the above are just opinions... Also, Dad, the character you wrote for the heroine is a bit = = and she feels a bit familiar. Reborn, I think only people who are beneficial to Vongola would do this And we still have to invite the heroine to Tsunayoshi's house... But... You don't do it to catch up on the plot, so...

Ahem... Every time I see it, the two of you leave messages and have conversations... I really feel like it = = Greedy for life and afraid of death I feel like this is somewhat contradictory to the previous one... If the heroine is the kind of person who is "greedy for life and afraid of death" I feel like I shouldn't have written about saving Ling from the wolf in the first place. It's completely different! Damn, let's change it a little bit... Or = = The bug is a bit big...

Guigui, just wait patiently for my new pit! I guess I'll have to wait until next week, because I'm still wavering... Secondly, Gui Gui, Nai's daughter is really a bad person. She is actually 75 Rambo. You really do it! Also, isn't Brother Caobi taking orders from Skylark? How can the principal control him? Moreover, why do I think this chapter collapsed?

"If I surrender and lose a card, then I have to repeat the same mistake and trade security for another card. I also gain a card, so in equal terms, completing the task of playing Kanna, losing a card, plus gaining a card , it's like working in vain. But if you fail the mission, you won't get the free cards from the Lord God, so... I grit my teeth, the mission failed!" I was quite confused after reading this sentence [Hold the Wall], Guigui, are you writing a tongue twister? Why is my head spinning just by looking at it? Why did you write such a convulsive paragraph? Do you have intermittent convulsions? [The corners of the mouth and eyebrows twitch together] Okay! Putting this aside, I really wanted to laugh while reading this chapter, especially when the heroine came out of Kanna's body. Well... How should I put it... It should be quite "interesting"! (You can understand the meaning by yourself) There are also some words that I haven't organized into words yet, so I can only use: You can't afford to get hurt! To replace all my languages! Finished speaking...

I don't mind... That's weird! You post everything to the top! What if Damen misunderstands me! ! ! ! Ah! ! ! ! ! Damn it! Clear my name! Snort! But it's come to this, and there's nothing I can do about it! Damn it! Just wait for your weakness to be exposed! Flying to write a novel

Houhou, not bad. I'm optimistic about you.