
(Chinese Paladin 3 and 5) Gathering Breath to Restore the Soul
(综仙剑三五)聚息返魂
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- Completed
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- 50k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- 14y ago
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Oh my miserable child
Doesn't it mean that after the seal, there is no way to travel through the six realms? Xiaoman's grandmother should be Ling'er, and Ling'er's father is King Heimiao.
It is quite interesting to see in the article that Xu Changqing is Master Qingshi, and I took an extended look at Black and White Fangyuan However, Xu Changqing is not specified in the latter article. It is only known that this person is similar to Dugu Yuyun. He has become an immortal and comes and goes without a trace. Also like Ziying?
The last sentence! ! I won't ruin this sad atmosphere by saying I laughed! Wipe
Forgot to rate. As the owner of the Jiujiu Bar, I feel that I am lucky enough to meet you authors. In fact, I was very nervous when I became a bar owner. I was afraid that a group of tweeting fans would whitewash him and then turn him into a bad person. Fortunately, Jiujiu was not popular in the end, and the people who came later were also reliable. In any case, the aggressor should not be labeled as "good" or "a good person". Seeing him betraying his relatives here is another kind of retribution for him [Holy shit, are you really a Moyi fan?]. The title of the long review was "Humanity will ruin three generations, greed will ruin a life"
I'm really sorry for taking so long to write this long review. But I really like this article so much that I don't know what to say. Because you said everything I wanted to say. When it comes to fan fiction, my evaluation of myself has always been nothing more than "inspiring others". I have many, many ideas in my mind, but they are often not satisfactory when written out, so my task is nothing more than to write some bad jokes, in the hope that more people, people who can write better articles than me, will fall in love with these characters and characters. So I'm very lucky that I, an idiot, can meet you and the other people on Twitter. Speaking of which, Baicai, you like Changqing and you also like Moyi, and you like to emphasize the three views and so on. We are quite similar, so when I talked about this article with you, I felt very close to each other. I felt that many of my thoughts were like "Wow, yes, yes, I think so too!" Of course, Baicai, your writing is better than mine, and you also have the perseverance to finish it without finishing... Okay, back to the topic, let's talk about "Gathering the Breath and Returning the Soul". If I remember correctly, the original intention of this article was the Mid-Autumn Festival greetings posted by Tweet Bar. At that time, it only had a short meme that looked like Youyi's "mooncake" at the beginning, and then it became more and more cute, and then one day, you posted it. The beginning of the article is very happy and surprising: when the uncle and nephew meet again, the little nephew who makes Mo Yi distrustful, uneasy, and disliked has become the king of Yaksha in his own right, with the ability to protect his elders in turn, and the determination to call back his dear elder brother. Oh, for a moment I thought the plot of a hot-blooded shounen comic was about to unfold. I also thought, "He Wen is really happy!" How can I put it, a happy and bright beginning is half the success of a sad article - good boy, you did it OTZ. After the brief reunion, all kinds of dramatic developments unfolded: Mo Xiaoman was no longer what he used to be, Xu Changqing died tragically at the hands of Long You [Hello, Chief Killer No. 2, Goodbye Chief Killer No. 2], Long Jiang, two former comrades in arms, had to [Delete] fall in love and kill each other [/Delete] to kill each other, Youming brothers are separated by yin and yang, Yushu regrets his lifelong temperament change... This is still the first part, and I will not say that the uncle-nephew relationship has deteriorated in the second part = = Baicai, you did a good job, you did a good job (trembling fingers)... I'm very satisfied. Really satisfied =w= Because what you wrote is completely in line with what I know about them. No matter it was Mo Yi, who was clearly Long You's uncle, he could simply say "Your Majesty's condolences" to Long Ming when his life or death was uncertain. It's still the soft-hearted Long You who seems to have grown up and has deep thoughts, but he still smiles and saves the life of the rebellious minister Mo Yi just because he is his blood relative. Or the resolute and calm Mo Yi who can laugh at casual clothes, or the Long Ming who goes to Shushan alone to save his younger brother, but can also torture Qingshi like a fierce ghost. There is also a blue stone that would rather break than bend. It is cold to the bone but it is just because he loves his master too much. Finally, there is Yushu who is deeply regretful. After reading too much, he did not know his own position until he was severely awakened by the death of a close relative. By the way, there is also our beloved Xu Changqing. The man who attracted me to the game of Sword and Sword, as always, maintained his "humanity" until death. Ah, having said so much, I just want to say how much I like everyone in this article. In fact, there is still a lot left unsaid, such as the still soft and waxy Xiao Jiang =w= the aura beauty Haitang =w= and the beginning of the plot with only two sentences, Jiang Shili desperately pushing away the demon shadow on the eve of the explosion... All kinds of intertwined love and hate, it is said that it is retribution, but after watching it, it seems that no one is really wrong. There is a saying..."In the beginning, human nature is inherently good." Okay, this is a human being, but what about demons? Speaking of which, among the Long brothers and their uncle in this article, Long You is indeed the only one who can be associated with the term "nature is inherently good". Anyway, it is well known that Mo Yi is a shameless and wicked person [Holy shit, are you really a fan of Twitter?], And Long Ming, as a king, will not be so clean. Only Long You, the former Young Master Long, is such a kind kid... Of course, when the word "greed" comes to mind, he is not considered kind. Yes, I said "greed". I have always felt that everything in the world is fair. It's like God's creation, giving horses agile legs, giving beasts sharp teeth and claws, and then came to humans and gave them brains to think. Compared with other creatures in the world of fairy swords, the biggest advantage of the demons is their vitality: they are immortal and do not enter reincarnation. Even if they die, the demons will still be resurrected with full blood after being reunited... Damn it, you don't believe Chi You but Brother Chun! So it's fair, the place where the demons live is the slag-like lava land in the game. Top-level vitality is matched with a low-level living environment. What a perfect match! But Mo Yi didn't think so. He thought about how wonderful the human environment was! Let's immigrate! ——Well, at best it sounds like an immigrant, but at worst, everyone understands. Mo Yi was greedy, so he suffered retribution and became warped. As for Long You, everything is safe and sound, the water veins are restored, King Yaksha is on his seat, and his uncle is not dead. What a happy ending. But Long You was not satisfied and thought about how great it would be if his brother was there too. Long You was greedy, so he also suffered retribution. In the end, Long Ming had similar ideas to Long You, but what was the result? He accidentally harmed his most cherished brother, and the relationship with his uncle gradually broke down... The word "greed" still exists. I have lived to this day, no more than twenty-five years, and I have seen a little bit of the word "greed". Human beings have desires, and it is impossible not to be greedy, but if you are too greedy, you will be asking for death. "Love what I get" I have used this signature before. Sometimes what we get and how much we get are not something we can easily control. So we can only accept it calmly, sometimes with a smile. There is nothing wrong with Long You missing his brother, but he is actually very lucky. He solved the problem of water veins by picking up girls. Human beings also care about him. What's more, Mo Yi who can help him is not dead. He still has a relative in this world, ha! How nice! But he still felt it was not enough. Not enough, not enough, not enough. He wanted to seize the Immortal's inner elixir, and he wanted to do the resurrection spell that would allow him to escape death. In fact, Long You's plan seemed good at the beginning. He didn't intend to kill Xu Changqing - but he didn't think about how that was possible. Someone who has been the head of Shushan should know with his toes that he is not a soft persimmon, not to mention what Long You is doing is similar to seeking skin from a tiger, how could he agree to it. He just wanted to think about his brother. His mistake was that he put this inappropriate "greed" into action, and almost lost everything after that. His lover, his master, the human beings who have good intentions and trust in him, his relatives, his subordinates, his country, and even... His only last life. The devil is doing it, and God is watching. A single move affects the whole body, and Xu Changqing dies, resulting in a series of horrific reactions like dominoes. This is called "retribution." Just like when I got to the end of Mo Yi, no matter how much I like him or my Uncle Mo, I can only say one thing: "Bah. You deserve it." It is very difficult to settle a bowl of water, especially when one of the parties is obviously more innocent, especially when I am of the same race as one of them. So I say "deserve it". Flowers bloom at both ends, telling the story of the heroic sons and daughters of the devil's family. Let me talk about Shushan again. Shushan in Xianwu... Is pretty good. Until Xiaoqiang broke into the twelfth house... No, everything was fine until the seventh house. So good until there… Then he started to let loose, and he ruined many innocent disciples. In the end, the sect was almost destroyed, and he almost became the second best in Qionghua. But Qionghua died of "greed", what about you, Shushan? Shushan died on "goodness". It is not ordinary "goodness", but the goodness of "nepotism" and "humanity". Just because the protagonist is their proud disciple, they make exceptions again and again. Long You, who is dressed in strange clothes and has a suspicious identity, is hastily accepted by Yushu. Several people's requests for artifacts are hastily granted [just a little test and a lot of leakage 0 0]... Then because of his partiality for these proud disciples, Jiang Shili reappeared in the world, and there were countless casualties in Shushan. For these few people, countless people lost their masters, countless people lost their apprentices, and countless people lost their relatives and siblings. Some people once complained that Shushan was unreasonable. Well, this time Shushan became clear and enlightened. How great! The result? Everyone has seen it. So I say this is not ordinary goodness - what is goodness? What is great kindness? Do you know the merciful and compassionate Guanshiyin Bodhisattva? When he accepted the red child, he used a lotus seat that could hook the flesh. When he helped Tang Monk, he gave him a tightening curse that could hurt Sun Wukong to death... But this is also called goodness. She is still a compassionate Bodhisattva. It is said that "Heaven and Earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs." This statement has been misinterpreted in Xiansi. The original meaning is not that heaven and earth are unkind and unjust, but that "heaven and earth treat humans and dogs with the same attitude. They will not treat anyone particularly well, nor will they treat anyone particularly badly." This is "great kindness", the real "bowl of water is even". Of course we can't ask Shushan to achieve this level, but at least you can be a little more fair. Have you really thought about what kind of consequences these willful demands of your beloved disciple will bring to most people in your sect? So in this article, Qingshi reflects on himself, but it's too late. Once he makes a mistake, retribution will come. First it was his master Xu Changqing, and then it was his turn. However, Qingshi died gloriously, and he was able to win the game back. I thought maybe if Qingshi died completely, Jiuquanxia would be able to feel more at ease. But Yushu is different. Yushu's "humanity" crime is even greater and more irredeemable. Almost as good as Xiaoman. But Xiaoman is young after all, and was still a little girl when he made mistakes, and as for Yushu... Tsk, it must be considered a professor level? Still a PhD supervisor. For - people - teacher - Biao! So his comeuppance has come. The senior brother who loved him the most in his life was tortured to death, and then he was resurrected still in pain, and he couldn't even walk openly in the sun! To put it bluntly, it is useless. And for Yushu to look at the arrogant Qingshi like this every day and become so useless, it is estimated that this junior brother is already in hell and is worse than dead. No wonder his temperament has changed drastically. Either way, that's fine. In the second part, Baicai pointed out a thorny road to recover the pain of the first part. Although these people were stabbed with blood and tears along the way, there was still hope for living. What you regret will never be too late, and what you lose will have a chance to be recovered. It's not that it's hard to recover because of the water, it's just picking up some spilled sand. Although it takes some time and effort, it's not completely irreparable. So when I saw the end, I couldn't help but put my hands together and pray. I can't help but be grateful for this ending. After experiencing so much cruelty and suffering so much torture, God still retaliates, and it is fair to give them a little kindness after a lot of malice. As for what happens next, it's all up to them. After the article is finished, the story does not end. They will continue to walk and live. Finally, thank you again Baicai for sending this article to Jiujiuba. Sorry for the late comment. T T When will you write another article? T T
... I didn't even know you posted a copy on GreenJJ. By the way, your article was recommended in Little Pink Wuqianlou. So come here and step on me, you know who I am. =3=
Insulting the devil with your expressions~ Hiding your face is more deserving of a beating than insulting the devil with your eyes, Mr. Qingshi
We strongly suspect that the mysterious figure is Chonglou or another reincarnation of Jingtian...
The reunion of the Three Treasures has really troubled a lot of people, but in fact I have always been a cost theorist. In terms of suffering, the Three Treasures have definitely experienced no less than any other demon. It's miserable, how can it be so miserable? Good results are hard to come by, but we must cherish them. Uncle, don't be arrogant, brother, don't be a scumbag, Xiaoyou, alas, Xiaoyou, are you considered to have completed your merits? Tsk, you committed a crime. . . Congratulations on finishing the article~