Diary of a Dark-Humored Analyst

The villain dies because he talks too much... The torture descriptions given here are simply like facing the brutality so directly~

In fact, it was pretty good before, but it's really disgusting here.

Finally finished reading it! ! Take it to the bar and recommend it! ! In terms of plot and romance, there are a lot of things that can't satisfy me... But I really think it's a very good Jianghu story, so I'm writing it seriously! In terms of language, apart from too many long sentences... In fact, Happy Tucao is quite interesting to read~ Come on~

It has always been "my own flesh". Is this me the heroine's or M Qi's? It's not what I thought... Otherwise, how could the male protagonist watch Mu Qi cut so many times before taking action? Whether he was trying to seize the opportunity or was already numb with grief, it still felt unreasonable and unbearable...

This is my first time to comment on a finished article. After reading the story and writing this comment, I hope that I will correct my mistakes if they are wrong. Let's get back to the business of the book, now let's start the review. The book as a whole has a humorous tone. No matter how the plot unfolds, there are always some details that will make people laugh instantly, like refreshments to adjust the mood. Reading chapter by chapter, your heart will not be tired with the fate of the protagonist. Everyone has things they don't want to face. After a busy day, I really like to pick up this kind of book, laugh out loud when I see interesting places, enter the world created by the author, and get rid of all the fatigue. If the reader and I are in the same mood, then this "Diary of the Anatomy of the Underbelly" is highly recommended. As a reader, I think this would be good for me, but after careful consideration when commenting, I still feel there are some minor shortcomings. After reading the whole book, the plot is unconventional, the jokes are very interesting, and the details are well handled. Often just one sentence can make people laugh. For example, using a bathtub to cross the river made me burst out laughing. Of course, some people will say that this is unrealistic, but I think that novels are not true after all. How about writing some internal skills formulas in the book and watching them practice, wouldn't everyone become heroes? I just hope that the language can be carefully considered. Some sentences seem tired and need a little more thinking to break up the sentences. In this case, most people will just look at the words and the carefully designed laughs will lose their meaning. There are some emerging words interspersed in the article. For these, I would like to express my own views. This article is not meant to be funny, so I think since it is an ancient costume, the language of the complaint should be more ancient, and it is best not to add the author's commentary and trendy sentences. Sometimes the well-created atmosphere may be ruined by one or two current phrases. It took a lot of effort to bring it in, but it was captured all at once. However, this does not mean that modern people must use ancient dialects when writing and speaking. It just needs to be in line with public sentiment. For example, words such as "er", "this guy", and "complaint" that appear many times in the article are acceptable to me, but "literary youth"... Of course, this is just my own feeling. Let's start from the front to the back. The dialogues in the first two chapters are quite good. They are not straightforward and are quite eye-catching. It can be seen that they are carefully thought out. But it gets more exciting as it goes on. Chapters three and four are more exciting than chapters one and two. I think maybe the first two chapters were very worrying when I wrote them, and it would be better if I relaxed a little more. The image of the heroine is very distinct, and some unexpected little things will always make people smile. The heroine's shrewdness and ulterior motives are cute, and it is very relaxing and joyful to watch. It's probably because of some visual fatigue after more than 20 chapters. At this time, the plot is not advanced, but just gags, which will be somewhat annoying. The plot unfolds in the middle, and the dialogues that appear are all words spoken by the characters, rather than simple descriptions. The content is very substantial, and it also leaves room for description and imagination in the mind. It can be seen that some parts in the middle are very difficult to write, the writing is not very smooth, and the sentences and plot are a bit cumbersome. The latter part is quite smooth, with natural expressions of emotion, and dialogue that fits the identity of the characters. For example, the low-spirited person said that the duel between the two was about spreading lime powder or something. The emotional scene at the end is also well chosen, but I think if it were not concentrated in more than 90 chapters, it would be more attractive if there was a small gradual progress in the middle and back part. The following are some suggestions that I have read in full. I will just say that Tuanzi will listen to them. There is a section in the middle where Guan Ying kills people for revenge. I know what the author wants to express. Although I have watched a lot of martial arts and understand that people can't help themselves in the world, and that grudges and grudges are what heroes do, but so many human lives still seem... If you want to express the character's personality, I think there is a better way. The Sunset Palace acts both good and evil, but it doesn't treat human life like this. The feeling of discovering a rebellious person is not shocking enough. If a person who doesn't like to express his feelings makes a mistake or two, the effect will be different. I don't think the ending is exciting enough. It's not just Guan Ying's torture that reflects anything, and Qin Zhi's gray hair... To be honest, I thought about it for a long time last night, whether the gray is true. I always felt that gray is just a mixture of white and black. I'm being picky here. To be honest, I didn't like the ending very much. I always felt that it didn't fit in with the whole story. I have read a lot of novels, and even if they break away from clichés, there will always be a routine. Instead of finding an ending that doesn't fit the whole story, it would be more admirable to have some twists and turns near the end. After combing through it carefully, the article has always emphasized the shrewdness of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but these two shrewd people were fooled so thoroughly. Is it because the others are too stupid, or are these two famous figures in the martial arts just trying to gain fame? The emperor should have some strategy, but he was not cautious enough to let alone be the mastermind behind this. Moreover, between the lines, this emperor did not bring any shock, and he was not as easy to remember as the several hall masters of the Sunset Palace. (Insert, I personally think that adding some drama to the hall leaders with distinctive personalities would be a great success) What Guan Ying died in exchange for was not worth it. Some of them were like the fools Guan Ying and Qin Zhi had been laughing at, and they did not see how much benefit they gained. To take a step back, is it considered smart to be betrayed so thoroughly by his subordinates? What does it matter if you use the raised wolf but forget to remove the wolf's teeth? In the end, these are just Mao Mao's humble opinions, and I hope Tuanzi doesn't mind. Ink-dyed Thousand Cities Critics Mao Mao Mao

I have recommended Dada's article to a group of friends. I really like Dada's article about the Jianghu mask of a passerby.

Here comes the dumpling! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm really here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Forgive me for forgetting Qin Tongzi and Guan Tongzi while following Douban live broadcast recently. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I'm so happy to see the extra! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! How is Guan Ying swollen? . . . . . . . . Are you feeling better? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Can you please be more detailed about the bridal chamber flowers and candles? . . . . . . . I really miss Qin Zhi's strong figure and majestic brother. . . . . . . . Don't forget Si Shang and Bo Yu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

See the end of this episode. . . Tuanzi, you still have a second episode, right?

In the end, there is only one comment: This is a scam...

So disgusting! I will never read your articles again. Can I curse you with such an ending? No more points. . . .