Dream of the Red Chamber: Lin Daiyu's Path to Immortality

The shell of the immortal literature, the core of strong men and weak women. The copywriting sounds nice, but in fact it's not that CP has been arranged, it's just a bluff. I think she is a strong woman, but in fact she is still vulgar.

The copywriting was all fancy, but in the end, a cp was arranged for Daiyu, who still had a strong desire for control.

At that time, I had finished reading this article completely. I wanted to post a longer comment, as follows: In fact, the setting of this article has many novelties, breaking the usual setting of Honghuangliu. For example, Fuxi, Pangu, Taiyi, and Yahweh are directly set as one person; some scholars do believe that Taiyi is the title of Fuxi; but in fact, Fuxi also has a creation myth-a painting opens the sky and so on. Then some settings from Greek mythology were also incorporated. However, this may actually cause some poisonous points, or problems that are difficult for readers to accept due to conflicts of common sense. In fact, my feeling is that this article seems to be on the wrong set - how should I put it, it is not suitable for the atmosphere of Jinjiang. I don't know how to explain it specifically, but it is indeed easy to be criticized. In fact, a very important point is the issue of shaping the male and female protagonists. The copywriting is a little off-topic - since it is Sister Lin who is cultivating immortality, readers expect her to be a strong woman to a large extent. But to be honest in this article, I really don't see anything particularly strong about Sister Lin. It feels like she is being shielded by her parents and her boyfriend. And in the end, it was still written that Sister Lin got married and was protected by her boyfriend. In fact, it would be better if it was changed to Sister Lin personally beating the villain in the face, the male protagonist assisting her, or a mixed doubles fight between men and women. The development in the article gives people a feeling that does not meet psychological expectations. Furthermore, in the title and copy, it is best to mark it as Red Mansions + Ancient Times + Comprehensive Mythology, because if the classification is wrong, it will be easy to be criticized, and many potential readers may be lost. In fact, I first saw the author's article in Honghuang's post forum, and since the author wrote about Honghuang, the differences from the general Honghuang need to be explained where there is something to say. The best place to appear is to explain the following accordingly - why your setting is different, what are the considerations for this setting; or simply explain it clearly in the copy. Then, in fact, regarding the myth of Persephone, in fact, the goddess of spring/Queen of Hades is not delicate. In some early sayings, she was the daughter of Styx, a terrifying female goddess of the underworld. She was very powerful, not weak, helpless and pitiful; then Pluto is not actually that pure. In Greek mythology, his lovers include Luce and Minta - the reason why he has fewer lovers than Zeus and Poseidon is purely because he is in conflict with the vitality as Pluto, and it does not mean that he is self-disciplined. Then regarding Yahwei/tianzhu, setting him as Taiyi's trumpet, this made me jump to the following, this idea is a bit excellent (can I whisper that I also support this setting, 23333). But it is very important and something that needs to be cautious is that mixing Western elements into Chinese mythology/prehistoric literature can easily be regarded as a poisonous point - first of all, it is very difficult to reconcile different myths. Furthermore, readers may think that the prehistoric setting is relatively high-end and Western. I feel that the style of mythology cannot keep up with it, so in general, the gods of Western mythology in prehistoric literature are not as powerful as Chinese gods. This is actually a prejudice to a certain extent, but it is true that Greek mythology has given many people a preconceived impression. In fact, if we dig deeper, it may not be the same as what we understand. In short, the author is a very creative and thoughtful author. I look forward to his other works! (I also read the author's other Red Mansions article, but it was too long and I lost interest after reading it)

What a joke, what do you mean in your article is that the gods in the West are more powerful than the gods in the East? It was the ancient gods who hit my bottom line. . Hades. . .

The Jia family is not clean, but at least they did not kill their father and marry their mother, and they are siblings. You get a **** Ouza to come to our land and pretend to be a lover!!!

It made me want to slap Lin Daiyu to death. What was originally a fair fairy turned into a crazy milk baby.

I think I saw a big joke. Jia Min beat Hongjun? Hongjun is the Taoist ancestor. Even if Jia Min is Nuwa, can she beat him?

Get out of here!!! How could Hongjun be beaten by a simple Jia Min! Even a Jia Min who has become an immortal! How can the golden finger be so evil!!! Damn it!!!!

It's fun to write in big letters, but I feel a little confused when I read it. The past lives of Jia Min and Lin Hai feel so confusing. One moment Nuwa is Fuxi and the other is Taiyi Fuyao. I can't figure out the relationship. I wonder if you could sort it out and map out the relationships between the characters?

Zhen Yuanzi came out, where is Monkey Sun?