The Loquat Chronicles

The author writes very well, I support it.

The author GN's writing is very cute~ The emperor's character design is very good~ and the promised extra story~

I'm asking for a side story~~~~ Let the two of them show us their sweetness. After reading this article last year, I would read it from time to time, hoping that there would be a side story, but it didn't happen every time. The author should write a side story~~

There are very few emotional scenes between the two people... The emperor's sultry side is not well portrayed and not cute... The article is not long but there are many CPs, which makes people feel that there are many things that have not been finished.

Please do a side story, please do a side story, where is the promised side story

The author's writing style feels very good, and it's very to my liking.

It's a very cute little article. I saw this article when I was in a literary shortage, and I felt very warm. I just felt that the interaction between the two of them was not enough. It would be great if there were one or two extras~~~Hehehehe, come on, the author~~

After reading it, leave a short review for GN. It can be seen that the setting of GN is very cute. The little loquat fairy who was bitten has a tooth mark on his face. Every story and every plot is written with great care, but I personally feel that the connection is not very good. I always feel that it has little to do with the emotional transition between attack and suffering. The author wants to write about the protagonist, Gong Shou, and the supporting characters are just to make the Gong Shou more outstanding. However, GN's article has the feeling that the supporting characters have too much writing and are taking over the main role. How does Gong like to feel? I need to put more thought into writing about his mental journey, it might be more exciting XD. I originally liked round and chubby people, but suddenly my aesthetic changed. It would be better to write more about the reasons. In addition, this is an ancient style article with more modern terms. Just a few words, I hope GN doesn't mind. Keep up your hard work~

[Huang Chengcheng followed his gaze and saw a solitary peach tree standing in the center of the peach blossom forest. The surrounding peach trees are all in bloom, but it is still a tree with green peach leaves and not a single flower. Author GN, I think this sentence is a bit common sense and wrong. . Peach blossoms bloom first in spring and then grow leaves. When the temperature reaches a certain level, they can grow at the same time. [You can go to Baidu to find out more] -________-\'\'Maybe I don't understand it correctly. It is better to write it as a bright branch.

Haha~ This article is so cute~