The beauties of the six palaces are breathtaking, yet even the fairest face can no longer remain innocent.
Once you enter the palace gates, one thought can determine victory or defeat. Who holds life and death in their hands?
She is a pawn. From the moment she entered the palace, she knew it.
Once, she trusted because she loved, only to have her heart broken.
She thought she had come to terms with life and death, only to discover she could not bear the pain of dying.
So she must survive, by any means necessary!
The struggle in the harem, the struggle for the throne.
Who used whom, and who betrayed whom?
With sincerity and false affection alike, who can still be trusted?
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Finished? Is our Su Bai so lonely?
In fact, there are not many highlights at the beginning of the article. The author's writing style is very stable, but there are too many characters at the beginning. After the plot is unfolded, it is still readable, but the emotional line progresses slowly. Although it is a Gongdou article, the emphasis has not been adjusted well, and the main line needs to be clarified. When the heroine appeared, there was nothing attractive about her. She had a cautious personality and a poor background. There was nothing special about her at all. However, as the plot unfolded, there was a sigh that could not be expressed in words when facing the heroine. The heroine has experienced life and death, which can be said to be a rebirth after the death of her family. This often appears in many palace battles or other articles. The eighth prince, an inevitable character in the article, pulled her out of dire straits, and the heroine's palace life began. There are many types of palace fighting stories. Some are written from the perspective of a concubine, some are from the perspective of a palace maid, and some are described from the perspective of a princess or other people. The protagonist can engage in the fight or watch indifferently. It is not clear whether the heroine is a palace maid or a concubine, but it seems that she is not aggressive at all, and can even be said to be an image of someone who can be slaughtered. She does things cautiously and tries to make herself appear smart, but it does not seem to be very ideal. The heroine is not smart, simple and ordinary, but of course when I saw her suspecting that Yixin framed her and finally abandoning her, I felt a very uncomfortable feeling in my heart. The heroine is not Mary Sue, but this approach is a little heartless, but if you think about it carefully, the heroine is the embodiment of many people in reality. Because her abilities are limited, she can do everything on thin ice, and when she faces something that will hurt herself, what she thinks of must be to protect herself first. The relationship between the heroine and Xin Ming and Yi Xin is complicated. She is envious but cautious of Xin Ming, and feels sorry for Yi Xin but feels guilty. It can be said that the heroine is a very delicate and rich emotional person. However, the plot of the article is a bit delayed and the progress is slow. The plot development can be appropriately accelerated to enrich the relationship between the heroine and several princes. After all, it is already 40,000 words, but for several princes, the heroine's emotions are still a bit unclear and seem to be stagnant. The plot setting is a little delayed but there are still some merits. There are many foreshadowings, which are revealed one by one and then laid out, one link after another. The writing style is very stable, but the plot setting still needs to be improved, but it is not clear whether there will be surprises in the later chapters. Of course, I really hope for a surprise, and I'm still looking forward to it. As a palace battle novel, the author's plot does not make any big breakthroughs, but it is a very classic palace battle. If you like pure palace battle novels, you can give it a try. I am still looking forward to the subsequent plot, because I really want to see the explosive point. I personally think that the heroine will explode at some point, but I hope the author will not drag out the plot too much and let the explosive things explode quickly, otherwise many readers will be lost. It can be seen that the plot setting is still carefully considered, but the ideas need to be straightened out, and I am a little confused after talking so much. In short, there is still room for improvement. The author still has potential, but he still needs more writing practice to improve his control. Hooking up is big, pay attention to details, but control the big road and don't go astray. I don't know if the author has an outline. If not, it's best to write one, because Gong Douwen will go astray without an outline. Send a long review~ Waiting for surprise~
He actually got married like this. The fourth prince is very courageous. I wonder how he will live after marriage.
Did the third prince know from the beginning? She actually married the fourth prince. She had so decisively cut off her feelings for the fourth prince before. Now she would marry him, which would probably be very embarrassing.
The fourth prince helped Yixin deliver a message to Su Bai, and the third prince helped Xinming deliver a message to Su Bai. This... Are the princes all free messengers? I always feel that Su Bai is here to suffer and has never had a good life.
Don't you think the part where Su Bai talks about her mother is very Qiong Yao... The third prince appeared suddenly.
Is the emperor finally in trouble? Su Bai is going to be pampered!
Xin Ming suddenly appeared. Does it mean that he is about to die? Why do people die for various reasons later? Sigh, although this is indeed the case in the harem, there is no need to squeeze so many repressed things together.
"Congratulations on being made a concubine by the prince." It's so modern. The princess died of illness? Thinking about it, after being ill for so long, delaying for so long, and now the prince has a concubine, he must be heartbroken. However, the Crown Princess is seriously ill and there is no reason for the Crown Prince to establish a concubine. Is it just for happiness? But that's not right either. I always feel weird when writing about Su Bai's views on Xin Ming
Finally, I saw Su Bai's resolute side. The third prince was just a sidekick, running from here to there, from there to here. I always feel that the plot progresses very slowly, and the relationship progresses even more slowly. How slow is this?