Beauty and the Beast is a new version of the tragic fairy tale,
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Pretty good. . Sincerely
“若水你这是报复吧”是若泉吧？“完全把小翠他们摔得老远不说”是不是“甩”？我看书还是很认真的
第3章看不到啊。。。。。能不能贴在[ 作者有话说] 里啊。。。。
I really don't understand the heroine's feelings. Faced with Yan Jue being abandoned and hurt time and time again, how could such deep love come from? Women are emotional, either love or hate. The Virgin is really only in novels
Why is this happening! !
Sometimes I'm really conflicted, or I always am. .
. . Don't be so pessimistic. Your first time writing is already very good. Believe in yourself. In fact, I once wrote an Internet King fanfic, but I couldn't continue writing after only a few chapters. Writing is really exhausting on my brain cells. It's great to be able to write it down, and I really think you wrote it very well.
Zi Qian turned white and became more beautiful after one month old. She will become even more beautiful in the future. I wonder if she can be better than Zicong Xiaoshota.
Pretty good. . Sincerely
“若水你这是报复吧”是若泉吧？“完全把小翠他们摔得老远不说”是不是“甩”？我看书还是很认真的
第3章看不到啊。。。。。能不能贴在[ 作者有话说] 里啊。。。。
I really don't understand the heroine's feelings. Faced with Yan Jue being abandoned and hurt time and time again, how could such deep love come from? Women are emotional, either love or hate. The Virgin is really only in novels
Why is this happening! ! Sometimes I'm really conflicted, or I always am. .
. . Don't be so pessimistic. Your first time writing is already very good. Believe in yourself. In fact, I once wrote an Internet King fanfic, but I couldn't continue writing after only a few chapters. Writing is really exhausting on my brain cells. It's great to be able to write it down, and I really think you wrote it very well.
Zi Qian turned white and became more beautiful after one month old. She will become even more beautiful in the future. I wonder if she can be better than Zicong Xiaoshota.