A Cup of Instant Coffee for Each of Us

Hey, the author. When I saw this kind of light and poignant article this morning, I couldn't wait to show it to my two other deskmates. Then one of me and I prefer comedies and thought the ending was quite happy. The other prefers tragedy. She said it was funny when she almost cried. She thought it was a tragedy. The final result was that she was tragic. We all think that the author's writing style is more suitable for writing tragedy with a touch of sadness. . So the three of us were entangled. . Author, what do you think?

They are all children who do not know how to express love. But being able to meet and fall in love is also a blessing. Fortunately, at least we can be happy together in the end.

The tone of the article from beginning to end has a touch of loneliness and a touch of sadness. Although it is often expressed in a narrative way and does not have a strong novel feel, the writing style is very good and can attract readers to keep reading. The climax of the article, which is also the ending, can be described as tear-jerking, full of helplessness and sentimentality, the kind of realistic love. The disadvantage is that the text modification needs to be strengthened, and there are some slight language problems in some places, but it does not affect the overall situation.

There was a kind of sad atmosphere at the beginning of the film, but it was completely swept away by the end, forming a clear contrast. During this period, the author tried to use the delicacy of writing to achieve the value of the text, but the delicacy also revealed a rare forgiveness, which was highlighted in the section about taking medicine. During this period, the use of words was also relatively mature. Obviously, the author has been immersed in the thinking of the text for too long. The dimness of the contradictions and conflicts has led to the writing being too loose. He may have completely ignored the complex and unpredictable emotional world outside. The presentation at the end is a bit "hasty" and "hasty" or even "wishful thinking." It could have been done perfectly, although the overall coordination and naturalness of the text help make up for the shortcomings. This also reflects some of the author's own perceptions and experiences of the world, which is looking forward to a beautiful vision. However, there are too many unpredictability in the human world, and the fundamental tragedy of joys and sorrows will not be eliminated, but will become more and more prominent in value. If the author can twist the ending of the text and make the writing more natural and smooth, the connotation of the text will be more apparent.

Although the material selection of this work is not novel, He Zi has also written it with his own style, and the writing style is sophisticated and the plot is well arranged. However, the atmosphere of this work is relatively depressing. Of course, many works nowadays even deliberately follow this style, so I won't go into details. This is a very powerful work, so there are not many bricks to shoot. If He Zi has different opinions, please feel free to discuss it. This article follows the narrative text plot line. It is very difficult to be vivid and prominent enough. He Zi did not do enough here. The excitement and suddenness of the text should be enhanced, and the transition should be as obscure as possible. Then from a single person's perspective, the article has little ups and downs. Perhaps there should be a big plot as a highlight. This plot can be written in detail. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. As for your style, you have to figure it out yourself. After all, it is your own freedom to choose what style and features you want. Finally, I don't know if it's because Xiaoyue is not good enough, but I'm a little confused about your middle part of the emotional line. What you expressed in the article has always been that 'the male and female protagonists are in love', but you inserted a scene in the middle where the male protagonist fell in love with Fang Xue'er and stood up for her. Of course, this can also be understood as a drama of 'the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist, but then changed his mind and fell in love without regrets'. But at the end, the male protagonist said, 'I got into trouble that time, and I thought you would be happy if I left. I thought I left without any worries, so I couldn't understand it, (/ □ \\). But, do you think this is a plot where the male protagonist loves the female protagonist but doesn't realize that he mistakenly thinks he is in love with someone else? You can mark it. If you are a reader, it means you are helpless. The above is Xiaoyue's opinion. I hope it can help Hezi. If there is anything wrong, Hezi should point it out!