Every day I crawled up to the clouds and gazed down at him again and again,
hoping he would live a smooth, healthy life to a ripe old age,
while also wishing he would pass away soon, so I could happily follow him into reincarnation.
I was torn like this until, after five years of climbing up to the clouds,
I finally got my answer.
But the answer turned out to be a little sour fruit,
so sour that I lost my footing and tumbled down from the clouds.
Amid the dust of the mortal world, a pair of arms, neither fat nor thin, neither dark nor fair, caught me securely.
I stared with my round, bell-like eyes and blurted out:
What an ugly girl!
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I don't know if the word count is enough for a long review⊙⊙ I'll just transfer the previous comment here~ After reading the entire article, it's time to formally write some remarks? But I haven't been formal for a long time, and suddenly I can't get up≡ (▔▔)≡ So just write whatever comes to mind. First of all, I was attracted by the copywriting and it took me only half a day to read it (of course it was also because of the short length of the text. As soon as I ran through the copywriting in my mind, I had a lot of speculations at the time. It was only now that I read the entire text that I realized that I almost didn't guess a single bit of it = Dis= I originally thought it was a story about endless abuse. The heroine's soul was floating in the clouds sadly, looking at her husband's health, hoping that he would be well, and hoping that he would come to the underworld to accompany her as a couple in the underworld soon... Until one day something unexpected happened, and her soul was reincarnated, but she turned into a fat black girl -_- Don't laugh, when I looked at the copy, I expected the story to be Jiang Zi's -_- I didn't expect that the full text would be so heartwarming and hilarious. I also like the narrative style and language of the story. I didn't see anything pretentious, sentimental, sad or naive. As I read the article, I felt a little confused. Did Joy like the article written by Tang Qi Gongzi? It's not that you imitate her and look like her, it's just that the little humor in the narrative reminded me of her~ Let me talk about the areas where my personal expectations were not met by you. First, do you dare to make each chapter longer?? Do you dare to stop rushing to finish the full text? It doesn't start at the beginning but ends at the end. T T If the original arrangement was for the heroine to return to her status as a fairy after her death, then it would be recommended to add a fairy scene to the beginning of the whole story, which would be considered as a tie-in. Blue Queen, you are finished like this, where is the torture point I was waiting for? The extra story written after the ending is good to watch, but I still feel like I shouldn't be in such a rush to finish it╮(╯▽╰)╭ Secondly, the whole story and characters are good, but it is revealed in the end that the emperor, queen, prince, and everyone else... Are so unwilling to be the masters of the country and regard the country as a child's play... This outlook on life... At least I personally don't like it and don't agree with it. After all, no matter how long the love between children lasts, kingdoms are always serious matters. Don't be so careless about the characters I like. My dears, it's really weird to just play football like this and still be happy... Because TVT likes this story, I made these weird opinions. Girls like Joy can just read them. Frankly speaking, among the articles written by the recent girls in the group, your article is one of the rare ones that I can calm down and read. It is a relatively mature one. I'll take good care of you. Waiting for you to MUA me, hum Oh, I'm afraid I don't have enough words, so I'll add a few more nonsense words. Well, the weather is sunny, the wind is clear and the moon is bright, haha~~-_-It's still daytime at all, okay? Be careful not to panic if you don't write a long review for more than a year -_- Also, I feel that Joy Girl's ancient poems are very stylish. Are you willing to write a historical essay? The period of Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties 0 0 Is the word count enough? Emma, let's do this for now QAQ
After reading the entire article, it's time to formally write some remarks? But I haven't been formal for a long time, and suddenly I can't get up≡ (▔▔)≡ So just write whatever comes to mind. First of all, I was attracted by the copywriting and it took me only half a day to read it (of course it was also because of the short length of the text. As soon as I ran through the copywriting in my mind, I had a lot of speculations at the time. It was only now that I read the entire text that I realized that I almost didn't guess a single bit of it = Dis= I originally thought it was a story about endless abuse. The heroine's soul was floating in the clouds sadly, looking at her husband's health, hoping that he would be well, and hoping that he would come to the underworld to accompany her as a couple in the underworld soon... Until one day something unexpected happened, and her soul was reincarnated, but she turned into a fat black girl -_- Don't laugh, when I looked at the copy, I expected the story to be Jiang Zi's -_- I didn't expect that the full text would be so heartwarming and hilarious. I also like the narrative style and language of the story. I didn't see anything pretentious, sentimental, sad or naive. As I read the article, I felt a little confused. Did Joy like the article written by Tang Qi Gongzi? It's not that you imitate her and look like her, it's just that the little humor in the narrative reminded me of her~ Let me talk about the areas where my personal expectations were not met by you. First, do you dare to make each chapter longer?? Do you dare to stop rushing to finish the full text? It doesn't start at the beginning but ends at the end. T T If the original arrangement was for the heroine to return to her status as a fairy after her death, then it would be recommended to add a fairy scene to the beginning of the whole story, which would be considered as a tie-in. Blue Queen, you are finished like this, where is the torture point I was waiting for? The extra story written after the ending is good to watch, but I still feel like I shouldn't be in such a rush to finish it╮(╯▽╰)╭ Secondly, the whole story and characters are good, but it is revealed in the end that the emperor, queen, prince, and everyone else... Are so unwilling to be the masters of the country and regard the country as a child's play... This outlook on life... At least I personally don't like it and don't agree with it. After all, no matter how long the love between children lasts, kingdoms are always serious matters. Don't be so careless about the characters I like. My dears, it's really weird to just play football like this and still be happy... Because TVT likes this story, I made these weird opinions. Girls like Joy can just read them. Frankly speaking, among the articles written by the recent girls in the group, your article is one of the rare ones that I can calm down and read. It is a relatively mature one. I'll take good care of you. Waiting for you to MUA me, hum
Why did the last three words make me feel inexplicably happy..."I'm dead." Pfft. When Emma was reading this chapter, she listened to Xiao Quer's "Zonghengpian", which was majestic and majestic, and felt~-_-I praised you for so many chapters, why haven't you appeared in the group yet?
Although it is true that the beauty is very cute, and the prince is very warm, it is true that they want the hard-working couple to get married and have babies as soon as possible and have fun forever. However, the heroine is not killed in the text. How come I haven't seen it here yet... Could it be that she only turned into an ugly girl in the last chapter, and the prince recognized the happy ending with a fairy grass stuck in the blue queen at a glance? Piece… doesn't like the ugly fat heroine TT-TT
Although it is true that the beauty is very cute, and the prince is very warm, it is true that they want the hard-working couple to get married and have babies as soon as possible and have fun forever. However, the heroine is not killed in the text. How come I haven't seen it here yet... Could it be that she only turned into an ugly girl in the last chapter, and the prince recognized the happy ending with a fairy grass stuck in the blue queen at a glance? Piece… doesn't like the ugly fat heroine TT-TT
(┬_┬) The beauty queen is SHI, I feel so sad. . The prince is so gentle and gentle~~Then the princess and the princess should be able to write a good story QAQ
We could have fried some shredded pork here, ah, ah, what a pity╭(╯^╰)╮
This miserable heroine -_- can be so unlucky because of the bad luck she cultivated in hundreds of lives.
Hmm... As expected, I was overthinking it.
Hmm... My vision is a little blurry, maybe my thoughts are too complicated...