
Ancestors, I Made a Mistake Again
祖先我又错了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 125k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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40Chapters
453Favorites
216Nutrient gifts
6.2kClicks per chapter
124Comments
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Shouldn't the same grandfather be cousins?
Is the burning key turned out to be a glass instrument?"""There are insects""""
It makes me so uncomfortable~! ~! ~~ I don't like the heroine! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
The article is very short. . . But it looks very long. . This is a very traditional YY article. The article involves money, male partners, family, and female evil partners, all of which are done to the best of YY's ability. Although the thunder was rolling, because the article was short, I bought Chapter V and decided to read it. After all, the copywriting was good. However, in fact, most of the time copywriting is a lie! That's a lie! There are some aspects that the author needs to pay attention to. Yy is okay, but yy is not good if it is too much. This article takes the route of opening a gold finger, but when it comes to numbers, it is very... Painful, such as 200 million pocket money and an IQ of 350... This is a very ridiculous setting. If you keep the copywriting style, it will actually be a good article. Later in the article, there are some shadows of novels I read in junior high school, some Korean style... Weiwei laughed a few times with disdain. Too immature, author sama. Lack of creativity. Any plot, plot, or even the main line of the article is not the author's own creativity. Many props are directly copied from Doraemon, which is even more painful. Isn't it very childlike? Character's reaction Very false. . . . . A man who can care about his first kiss with an unsalted woman is an incredible existence, whether in reality or in the two-dimensional world. Character dialogue Too white. There is no sense of fiction. . Although the novel requires realistic character dialogue, don't write it too plainly. . . The difference between writing and speaking is that it is more concise and artistic. . . Also, the sarcasm of the women when they were surrounded at the beginning was so stupid! This is a good article to complain about, and each chapter can have a lot of flaws. . . . . . . "Has anyone complained about the male protagonist's 33 years of love? He hasn't submitted a paper for three years, but the female protagonist's exquisite wisdom didn't notice anything was wrong." "Human experimentation is illegal... Three thousand years later, there are still low-level lightning devices instead of direct electrocution. It's really environmentally friendly! Is there a system that does not require energy?" "Ah!! Is there any article with space as the main line that was actually written as a campus article?" It's really a piece of writing that reminds people of their youth. Those simple and ridiculous words. With a strong green aura. The gorgeous flashing light blinds the dog's eyes. But it has a faint spiritual energy. People can't help but read the entire short text of it. After reading it, I recalled myself many years ago, Is it seven years or eight years? The author doesn't need to be angry because of the rant, I'm making fun of myself. Seven or eight years ago, my writing skills were thousands of times worse than yours. I like to write about heroines who float in the air, own thousands of tons of banknotes and jewelry, and have the reputation of being the world's first princess. What a ridiculous idea. And now I am happy to write the executioner's story, happy to write The Sorrow of the Reborn "I am a person who has been reborn many, many times. At the 1231st time, I met you. At that time, you were my most hated enemy. And at the 3999th time, I discovered that we can become friends of life and death." "This is ridiculous. If this is true, your body can be reborn, but your soul must have been corrupted." "You can guess that my tired soul was also so happy at first." "I can guess that the experience and wisdom accumulated over a lifetime will make you unique in the world." "But I am no longer satisfied with the glory, power, wealth and love that can be easily obtained. I am not even satisfied with eternal life." "What else in the world do you care about?" "No more. I have been a gourmet for many, many lives. I have traveled all over the world and eaten different foods every day. I have been a pirate, robbing travelers and merchants wandering the sea, even though I am so yellow and stand out among a group of white people." "You've done everything you wanted to do, and accomplished all the dreams you could dream of. There's nothing more you can look forward to." "This is such a cruel reality, my friend. I have never been far away from you since I met you. After one thousand two hundred and thirty-one encounters. "At that time, you used all your strength to resist me. " "You are my joy, my hope. "
15 Years old... To put it bluntly, this was puppy love. Did you not care about it at that time?
Actually... This is the ending...
This ending... I rub the class! I always thought it was NP, Hundan...
Why haven't you escaped? But it's okay not to want such a man. You can see his true face clearly, but don't let him talk nonsense everywhere, otherwise Sasha will be miserable.
You actually cheated! ~Unforgivable! ~
Sprinkle flowers and sit on the sofa. It's not easy.