If there had been no hurried first glance, if there had been no breathtaking first dance, perhaps we would both have continued along our original paths, content to sink into the passage of time. If this is a wager ordained by fate, I would rather stake everything I have. Even if the ending is eternal damnation, I don't want to draw breath alone.
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So cute~ Your beloved is always by your side, so what's so hard to find? Hide your face and run
However, if a beautiful and loving man wants to have both. . . Shen Suiyin, keep working hard. . .
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Hello. I read your book and thought it was good. However, there is a small drawback that I would like to tell you. I won't deny the author's hard work here. In fact, the writing is really beautiful. Please add my account □
Why are you writing books? Your clicks are miserable. Why are there so few recommendations? Is it because of your strength? Is it an idea? Or is it the writing style or other factors? First of all, the plot is also relatively rich, which shows that there is room for development. However, there are obvious deficiencies in the characterization of the characters. Secondly, the plot does not develop quickly and the procrastination is not suitable for newcomers! Although these are just small flaws, if you don't pay attention to them, they will directly affect the development of the book. If you want to know more details, Qianmeng Sangxun (shi) is a good friend - Yishan Lu Yisi Lu Si Jiuling Lu. Believe me, the quality of your works will definitely improve, and you won't be disappointed!!
So cute~ Your beloved is always by your side, so what's so hard to find? Hide your face and run However, if a beautiful and loving man wants to have both. . . Shen Suiyin, keep working hard. . . Here is an external compilation~ The name of the [Little Penguin] below is: Millennium Jinyi [Just copy it~ Please add and make progress together =v=
Hello, dear, your article is very good. I wonder if you can authorize it. Our club wants to use your article as the opening drama~