Slowly Falling in Love

Somewhat messy. But it is still a good article. Come on!

There are a few traces of tears, upstairs, please give me a hug.

Very good article, I like it

Still feel a bit complicated And modern literature... At least as far as your article is concerned Seeing that it doesn't attract me now, I feel like there's nothing special about it There are many similar plots like this If you want someone to read an article, it must be new if it is popular. New subject matter ew plot\innovation is the most important If the text seems to be the same from time to time, it will be difficult for people to continue reading it. Xiaoling is also facing such a problem~~~so I am working hard to modify it. However, you have written such a long article... If you want to revise it, I'm afraid it will take some time.

Although it is very fluent, the writing style is the same as mine, a bit too casual. But a little better than me It's just that Odada has a title for each section to summarize the plot. Even if it's a bit complicated, there's still a central point.

Not bad, keep it up :)

I'll take a look at it and wait until the exam is over to take a look at it. It looks good.

Thank you in advance to all the friends who left me messages. It is my first time to write an article and I am very happy to be recognized by everyone. Of course, there must be a lot of problems. As Nishui, Nanyuanlan, and $$ said, the first chapter is indeed written poorly and has no key points, sweat… Little girl, I will try my best to correct it. I hope you will have any comments or thoughts after reading the following article. Feel free to mention it. I will be very grateful to the little lady.

The author revised the first chapter. Try to change it to be as attractive to readers as the following chapters~~

Haha, thank you for your self-recommendation. The link is now available. Let's put it this way, usually the beginning of an article is very important, it determines the reading rate to a large extent. Of course, this is for some authors who are not outstanding in writing, just like Xiaolan. . . The writing is not good. . . It won't start either. . . So. . . People who read poorly. . . Haha, gc is still big