
[First Fog] Crime and Punishment
「初雾」罪与罚
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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In fact, my love for Spedo came only after reading an article inadvertently. But it is now that I have such a profound feeling~☆The sentence "He said,..." Is so touching, indicating that I really like the style of this article. Speaking of which, in fact, after reading Grandpa Shigugu's article, you will have the feeling of "Are you really a real man after a hundred years? He is not the god of death but a tutor?" Because the tutor's view of time is still within the normal scope after all. But the feeling this time is - if this is Spedo, then it would be really nice to spend hundreds of years loving someone like this. Thousands and hundreds of years are too illusory, and ten years does not seem long enough in writing. So, isn't a hundred years just right? Therefore, Mo Sheng's writing is amazing^_^b. Sprinkle flowers
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to to to to to to to to to to to to to Totsed and and and most beautiful and beautiful sister you are so beautiful(?)! ! ! It's the first time I've seen Grandpa Shigugu BG so beautiful and perverted (?). It's so beautiful. I love this style, I love perversion, I love twisting! [It's so bad, I cover my face
First of all, I would like to pay homage to the author Jiang Zhang for his word count of 5,000. Then start the review. A subtle but not depressing style. The long history runs through time, and there is an existence named Spedo in the middle. The almost eternal obsession from beginning to end makes the emotions become clearer and change. Naturally. It makes people inexplicably and clearly moved. Spedo's existence has inexplicably attracted everyone's attention from the beginning. Yes, from the beginning. I don't have any love for pineapple heads, but when I saw this similar mushroom, I was inexplicably moved. Perhaps I have never seen a person who can be so complex and thorough, so thorough that he is almost simple and pure. Perhaps it is the purity of simplicity that makes it seem so complex? Have no idea. I can only say I don't know. Because Amano-niang didn't look like she was treating him well! [What's Elena's reason? You're so stupid! Amano, are you at a loss for words? ! I don't hate Miss Elena, but I just think it's too bloody and ridiculous...] Speaking of which, when I first met this guy, I criticized his thick lower eyelashes. If you put that kind of thing on anyone's face, even if he is a top-notch monster with a monster personality and evil deeds, he will exude a dull air. Coupled with that strange outfit that seems to smell like leather... It's really embarrassing. Fortunately, with the hair that attracts more attention, people's shortcomings are suddenly transferred. It's true, I obviously don't like her appearance or anything else, but I like her inexplicably. Perhaps as the author said, because I have some similarities with him [I guess it's his perverted personality and facial expressions (?)], I will pay special attention and think about him when I look at him. Well, I've been talking to myself a lot... So let's make some comments or something... [Hey, didn't you really just make up the word count? ! So this is the dividing line for comments (to make up the word count?) The relationship between Miss Avenger and Spedo is like a family relationship. Indifferent warmth. ——How should I put it, I don't really believe in the solidity of love. Just believe that only family love is forever. Ha, he is indeed a strange person. However, I have always felt that it is really happy to be able to say "I'm back" to a place every day, and then get a "welcome back", warm but not heartwarming, with a natural sparkle. ... Hey, did I go off topic again... [Cover face] Speaking of the fierce soul, it is indeed very attractive. But, I only like guys who are overly restrained. I only like the kind of monsters walking in the world. [Laughs] Because of longing. Because I can't do it myself. How can this world of rules and regulations create such a free and unpredictable fog? But, this world will be more stable because black and white are mixed up. We who can live in a gray world are actually much happier than they who only see black and white. ... Huh? It seems that we have turned to a strange place again? Well, a certain song is really incompetent in terms of reviews. So forget it [Yuanmu]. Anyway, author-chan, your writing is so good, I just took it away without you being polite~ >3<