Wrote a story about a killer. Although the length is very short, it is very innovative, the writing is very smooth, and the story is very good. Although the story is a bit sad, I love reading it. The wording is good and it is very exciting. !!!!!
Everyone, please write down the plot you want to have.
You are still a killer, and you should not be the only one to survive under the sword.
I like this sentence very much.
Nice writing^^
Let me talk about my own feelings.
I think the idea of the article is very good. A man and a woman can make him fall in love deeply.
However, the expression of feelings is too implicit. Although there are some places that can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words, there are other places that can be touched upon a little bit. For example, why the killer is so persistent in his feelings for women? It's not just because she is a beautiful and brave woman.
And. . . Well ////beat me. . . I don't think a woman can be that thoughtful. . . Hehe. . Personal opinion. . Table beat. . . . .
Thank you Ling'er for your comment. You are right. Some editors also said the same. To be honest, it's not that I don't want to write more, but no matter how much I write, I don't know what to write. It's the first time I'm writing this kind of article, and I really can't think of a plot. It's already very difficult to come up with these.
The purpose of my initial writing was just to express the change process of a killer's heart from numbness and coldness, to warmth and melting, to fluctuations, and finally back to coldness. It is really difficult to be a good person. As for "me" and a woman, I don't think there is much love, but more of warmth. I personally think that the highest level of interaction between people, including men and women, is not how strong the love is, but cherishing each other and being able to cling to each other for warmth. As for what experiences each of "I" and the woman have that make them cherish this meager relationship so much, like two children abandoned by the world in a corner and no longer warm, I really can't think of the best story that can express that kind of mood, so I simply won't write it. It's up to the readers to imagine and choose the background they think is good. I don't want to settle on a hard-line possibility and ruin other subjective good feelings.
This is an article that is not outstanding. The insufficient plot is a major shortcoming. The number of words is a bit short, but after all, I fully expressed what I wanted to express, and it was no more or less complete. I used those short sentences according to my own wishes to express the hurried arrival of the killer in his long killing career. The warmth that has passed away in a hurry, I no longer care about the success or failure of the submission (of course not including the royalties), good or bad, I like to write articles, I do what I like, I am very happy to be able to share and discuss my articles with everyone online, I feel that this is very fulfilling.
Of course, I would also like to thank the netizens who commented on me, because I am so happy because of you.
To be honest, the writing is very good, but unfortunately the number of words is too few and the content is not substantial enough. I think this is the reason why your submission failed.
If you have such good language skills, you must continue to work hard. I believe you will succeed.
I hope you can enhance the fullness of the plot and the number of words must be more!!
It seems that some people still like it, I'm really happy. I submitted several manuscripts without success. But I am very happy to have your support. Thank you.
Yeah
Different from the more old-fashioned routines
Or go back and be a killer?
Like
One word: great!
Two words: great!
Three words: great!
I really like this short story. The writing is so gorgeous!
Wrote a story about a killer. Although the length is very short, it is very innovative, the writing is very smooth, and the story is very good. Although the story is a bit sad, I love reading it. The wording is good and it is very exciting. !!!!!
Everyone, please write down the plot you want to have.
You are still a killer, and you should not be the only one to survive under the sword. I like this sentence very much. Nice writing^^ Let me talk about my own feelings. I think the idea of the article is very good. A man and a woman can make him fall in love deeply. However, the expression of feelings is too implicit. Although there are some places that can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words, there are other places that can be touched upon a little bit. For example, why the killer is so persistent in his feelings for women? It's not just because she is a beautiful and brave woman. And. . . Well ////beat me. . . I don't think a woman can be that thoughtful. . . Hehe. . Personal opinion. . Table beat. . . . .
Thank you Ling'er for your comment. You are right. Some editors also said the same. To be honest, it's not that I don't want to write more, but no matter how much I write, I don't know what to write. It's the first time I'm writing this kind of article, and I really can't think of a plot. It's already very difficult to come up with these. The purpose of my initial writing was just to express the change process of a killer's heart from numbness and coldness, to warmth and melting, to fluctuations, and finally back to coldness. It is really difficult to be a good person. As for "me" and a woman, I don't think there is much love, but more of warmth. I personally think that the highest level of interaction between people, including men and women, is not how strong the love is, but cherishing each other and being able to cling to each other for warmth. As for what experiences each of "I" and the woman have that make them cherish this meager relationship so much, like two children abandoned by the world in a corner and no longer warm, I really can't think of the best story that can express that kind of mood, so I simply won't write it. It's up to the readers to imagine and choose the background they think is good. I don't want to settle on a hard-line possibility and ruin other subjective good feelings. This is an article that is not outstanding. The insufficient plot is a major shortcoming. The number of words is a bit short, but after all, I fully expressed what I wanted to express, and it was no more or less complete. I used those short sentences according to my own wishes to express the hurried arrival of the killer in his long killing career. The warmth that has passed away in a hurry, I no longer care about the success or failure of the submission (of course not including the royalties), good or bad, I like to write articles, I do what I like, I am very happy to be able to share and discuss my articles with everyone online, I feel that this is very fulfilling. Of course, I would also like to thank the netizens who commented on me, because I am so happy because of you.
To be honest, the writing is very good, but unfortunately the number of words is too few and the content is not substantial enough. I think this is the reason why your submission failed. If you have such good language skills, you must continue to work hard. I believe you will succeed. I hope you can enhance the fullness of the plot and the number of words must be more!!
It seems that some people still like it, I'm really happy. I submitted several manuscripts without success. But I am very happy to have your support. Thank you.
Yeah Different from the more old-fashioned routines Or go back and be a killer? Like
One word: great! Two words: great! Three words: great!
I really like this short story. The writing is so gorgeous!