This is my first work. Please give me your advice. Any opinions are welcome, but of course I am ------- haha, think about it.
In that distant time and space;
There is a legend circulating;
When the Star Lord, who represents life and wisdom, is born into the world;
The flower of life will be with you, blooming brilliantly;
When the two become one;
Great power will be born;
Give it the power of God.
This is Hua'er's first time writing an article. It's an amateur work. If you want to see the details, please stop by, haha!!!
Intention:
Reader comments
Another hole has been filled.
Support, always support you
Well written, very interesting
Not bad
Isn't the girl just a little younger?
Write a continuation!!!!!!
It's amazing~! I like it very much~ I'll make up for you when I have time~ Now I have to read a book~ I really don't have time to type~ I'm so sorry~
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Great. I like it~!
Hua'er, the articles you write are all beautiful.
Haha, scatter flowers~~~~~~~~
Good. . . . . . . . . . . .
You should be more aggressive when scolding people~~
Revenge should be more severe
It's better to let those two women OXOX
Hehehehe~~~
So-so, okay, keep going
I rushed through 4 of Hua'er's novels in one afternoon. They were so good. Spread the flowers.
Great support~~~~
I looked at the later ones, and then looked at the earlier ones. Are there any connections between them?
Shenyin is still the best looking
Ten reincarnations
Looks good!!!! Keep going!!!!
Hua'er, I really want to ask, are you interested in a bit of torture at the end of the article?
Shenyin and this Star Master waited several years for the male protagonist before the female protagonist came back.
Another BL article, I have been waiting and waiting for decades, woo woo woo, I think they are so pitiful, I passed 8, it is very well written, people like ING~~~~~~~~
Another hole has been filled.
Support, always support you
Well written, very interesting
Not bad Isn't the girl just a little younger?
Write a continuation!!!!!!
It's amazing~! I like it very much~ I'll make up for you when I have time~ Now I have to read a book~ I really don't have time to type~ I'm so sorry~
A very nice novel! I love it so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! Big! Hua'er, I love you so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Supplementary points for you: 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999... Come on! ! ! !
Great. I like it~!
Hua'er, the articles you write are all beautiful.
Haha, scatter flowers~~~~~~~~
Good. . . . . . . . . . . .
You should be more aggressive when scolding people~~ Revenge should be more severe It's better to let those two women OXOX Hehehehe~~~
So-so, okay, keep going
I rushed through 4 of Hua'er's novels in one afternoon. They were so good. Spread the flowers.
Great support~~~~
I looked at the later ones, and then looked at the earlier ones. Are there any connections between them?
Shenyin is still the best looking Ten reincarnations
Looks good!!!! Keep going!!!!
Hua'er, I really want to ask, are you interested in a bit of torture at the end of the article? Shenyin and this Star Master waited several years for the male protagonist before the female protagonist came back. Another BL article, I have been waiting and waiting for decades, woo woo woo, I think they are so pitiful, I passed 8, it is very well written, people like ING~~~~~~~~
Come on! ! Go ahead.