It was that little tune from her childhood. After all these years, she finally remembered how it went. She lay on the rattan chair, rocking gently, her lovely face wearing a kind, gentle smile as she softly hummed the tune.
In fact, the writing is good, and the key copy contains large paragraphs of quotations. It is inevitable that some readers will not like it.
It is recommended to cut out one or two sentences and it will be ok.
Adding some design, cover, etc. Doesn't have to be expensive, but since you are so young, it will look boring.
Above, finally, I wish your article a hit!!
Not bad, keep writing!!!!
Please support me. I am also a new writer. If you have time, go read my articles and search for the author. Just a young pervert. Let's encourage each other, haha. Come on, don't give up!
Why has the male protagonist's attitude changed so much? Your story plot is very good, but I think there is room for improvement in the description of the text. But if you ask me for specifics, I can't give you a specific answer. This is just my feeling, which comes from reading the article, hahaha. Quick update
Well, this heroine speaks so radically.
Until he heard that there was a typo in front of her. The plot of your story is pretty good. Keep writing it and practice more, and you will succeed. I will give you a bunch of flowers.
In fact, the writing is good, and the key copy contains large paragraphs of quotations. It is inevitable that some readers will not like it. It is recommended to cut out one or two sentences and it will be ok. Adding some design, cover, etc. Doesn't have to be expensive, but since you are so young, it will look boring. Above, finally, I wish your article a hit!!
Not bad, keep writing!!!!
Please support me. I am also a new writer. If you have time, go read my articles and search for the author. Just a young pervert. Let's encourage each other, haha. Come on, don't give up!
Why has the male protagonist's attitude changed so much? Your story plot is very good, but I think there is room for improvement in the description of the text. But if you ask me for specifics, I can't give you a specific answer. This is just my feeling, which comes from reading the article, hahaha. Quick update
Well, this heroine speaks so radically.
Until he heard that there was a typo in front of her. The plot of your story is pretty good. Keep writing it and practice more, and you will succeed. I will give you a bunch of flowers.