Lacrimosa

It's sad, but I think this is the best ending. He is Chrollo Ruxilu.

[1] Are you one of God's people? Is he a lovable angel? You should be held in the palm of your hand, without any dust stained at all, so why do you fall into this place? You are supposed to be standing on a high platform, with your people looking up to you, and you listening to God's will and bringing them victory and glory - why have you fallen here? [Two] Who are you waiting for? ——Forgot. How long have you waited? ——Forgot. Have I already waited? ——Maybe. Why do you look a little sad? --Have no idea. You are so weird. [Three] Death is liberation. It's hers, because she finally broke away from this heavy, turbid, and dirty body and headed to the other side of the spirit. It's also his, because he no longer needs to hold the glass in his hand all the time to be able to spread his black wings and fly away. [Four] This can be regarded as a dead-end article, but I really feel that the HE ending may be because I am too bearable? The group leader still grew up to be the group leader, and the beautiful, petite and pure girl did not reach the final step of being completely torn apart - let's end this story right here, when neither of them has fully grown up.

. . . . Abuse,, it breaks my heart, I'm about to cry

Oops, sweat was pouring from my eyes. (Oh no, how low should my crying point be!!)

Ouch! Ouch! ! ! QAQ I shouldn't have opened it so cruelly... Abuse is the worst thing to read... It's so heart-wrenching! !

I was tortured to the point of qAq... Can Nian is so sad, can't I get back the past? [.] I was healed by the words "Sleep, I will guard you" until I was tortured to cry in the end [.

Ouch! ! Leave that sad feeling to me! ! ! !

The emotions are clearly expressed and the descriptions are vivid. The language and phrasing are good, and the method of writing from multiple perspectives of bystanders allows readers to see clearly, or perhaps feel more emotions. The timing of the cut is also very suitable. The small fragment cut in at the end just adds the finishing touch to the entire article, and also provides a good summary. Overall, it's an excellent short story. The only drawback is that the writing is a bit immature, and more work could be done on the side descriptions.

A very magical place in Meteor Street. . No matter which author writes Meteor Street. . They are all magical places. . I can't imagine whether such a place really exists in this world. . I can't even imagine what the people from that place would look like. . The female pig here is a bit obviously giving up on herself. . She saw death as a relief. . . And it's not that Chrollo doesn't feel sad. . It's just that I don't have the time and mood to be sad. . . Just like the ending said. . Maybe the members will not remember that this person ever existed. But it was impossible for Tuan Da, who had an invincible memory, to forget her. . . Even Wo Jin's death will make Tuan Da sad. . How could he be a bloodless and heartless person? ? Just them Meteor Street people. . Get used to patience. . Get used to forgetting. . Forget everything. . Pain...

When I saw him dying, and then I remembered the heartbeat of Chrollo who had accepted death (even though he was mostly from Meteor Street), I always felt that maybe he once had very strong emotions and lost an important person like this. Because of the experience, loss, perception and pain, he learned to accept, change and endure.