A Maid's Tale: Flowing Clouds

The heroine described by the author is so disgusting and mentally retarded. It was simply a slander and insult to Shen Liuyun.

Why is there not much dialogue? It feels weird! Liuyun has been abroad for a few years and is about to go back. Will he achieve anything in France?

I don't like Fang Shaoling. I don't like it. It was okay at first, but judging from the conversation between him and his father, the two fathers and sons feel that they have no basic respect for women. The heroine asked for it on his own, so he can't just let someone else bring it to his door. Those two father and son are completely unqualified as Nanzhu in the novel, inferior product! I am so disgusted to death! Especially in this chapter, what is meant by "Although I miss you very much, I have many women around me just because I don't want you." In order not to miss you, I have to have a good woman. Why does this make me think of the sentence "I have to build a chastity memorial arch after doing what I did?", I am so speechless. "I want to use time to confirm whether you have changed and whether you are the one I want." This sentence is even more shameless. When I was a child, I kept begging for nothing and started to regret it later. This is not an obvious delay for others. Oh, first put a label on someone and write that it belongs to so-and-so. You can't steal it. You can't think about others. As for whether I want you when the time comes, I still want to see if you meet the requirements. There are things even worse than this. In TV dramas, there are scumbags. But in your novel, there is absolutely no change. You are just changing the character of the heroine to adapt to the scumbag. It's obvious! Then what's the point of writing this article? The reason for giving flowers to Da Da Da is because it is not easy to write an article and it has nothing to do with the content of the article. I am really indignant!

I feel that the heroine is not much different from Fang Shaoling in the original drama

Your article, the New Moon article is okay, just boring. After all, where is the general era? In this article, if Liu Yun is really such a temperament, no one will really deserve it. It is like trying to portray herself as a high-ranking princess trapped in a lonely tower with a curtain half-covered. She is trying to make her image more generous and close to the image of the classic heroine of Qiong Yao. I am really tired of reading it!

Why do I want Liu Yun and Master Lin to be together so much? In fact, I had a good impression of him. But I don't like him very much after reading the big article.

Why is this female pig so indecisive? Now that she has decided to give up, why is Lin Yu still thinking about him? Why can't she let go of him? Why does she feel so affectionate? She eats the food in the bowl and thinks about the food in the pot. She hates the female pig.

Woman, do you dare to be more pretentious? What kind of character is Fang Shaoling really? The heroine can make a conclusion based on appearance and TV plot alone! He is a living person! He was really having an affair with someone even though he was engaged. He knew that Lin had a fiancée but he didn't control the distance. There were scandals in the whole school. Is the distance really considered as ordinary friends? This best friend thing is the most disgusting! I can never figure out what I want... I'm never in the right state. I'm always in pretentious pain. Is there any actual action to improve my predicament and get rid of the watery situation? It's so annoying! She always said that she would not marry Fang Shaoling. Are there any practical measures? I only saw her communicating ambiguously with her fiancé there. Damn it, wait until the year of the monkey, the month of the horse, NC comes out and the engagement is annulled! Is this good for you, Ju Guangrong? To say that she simply married an acquaintance who knew everything about her, she didn't see the heroine working hard for her future life. It was just too pretentious. Such pretentious love in an era when the country was ruined and the family was ruined was really bad. She could never figure out the situation. To put it bluntly, she deserved to be hurt (emotionally) all the time!

Chi~~··. . . . 'Familiar figure'. . . It's Lin Yu who's not so cruel. . . . By the way, I always feel that Shaoling knows about Liu Yun in France. . . .

This name is really unpleasant, and it makes me feel awkward. It's not that the name is bad, but it seems too deliberate in the text. There is no need to use such a deliberate name to highlight Fang Shaoling's playboy and nonchalantly joking tone. Yunmei and Liuyun will not affect the effect the author wants to express. And it's more in line with the feeling of that era. This makes me feel like I have made this article look white and bloody...