Online Gaming: Take Down That Older Guy!

Author, I have been reading your article since the end of April, and now it is October... Suddenly I want to lament why it is different from what I read before... But I am so happy that it is finally over...

Ahhhhhhhh finally finished reading it!

Hello Shi Lian, I am a professional diver drifting in the west wind. If you have subscribed to this article and have been silently following V in its entirety, I would like to express my gratitude to you for finally filling in this lovely hole. It is a good virtue to fill the hole when you dig it. Please continue to maintain it! A small aside, I write Western fantasy, rarely read modern novels, and mostly read Danmei online game novels, but "Bring Down the Uncle!" "I only read three chapters of this article before decisively saving it. It can be said that the first half of this article has completely hit my cute point. The combination of the grumpy uncle + the natural loli is quite perfect. The characters of the two are well shaped. Each has its own characteristics and is not ordinary. The development of the plot is also natural and smooth. There are some cute little things, such as the inexplicable affection and sticky feeling of the girl Mi Fengxin towards the uncle, the uncle's coquettish heartbeat, and jealousy, all of which made me very happy. It can be said that what makes my heart beat faster in this article is the ambiguous and ambiguous state of the relationship between the two. When I read this, I can give this article a score of 85 or above. But how can I put it, the second half feels a little different. It's not about your writing style, but it's just that the way you deal with various issues is too confusing. Let's talk about the online game part first. This part really didn't have any explosive points in the later period. It smelled like a running account. After Feng Luo RMB armed himself, I felt that the story began to become dull and bloody. Reality and online games were intertwined in a somewhat confusing way. The many small conflicts that stand out make people feel bad after watching it, and it always feels like many events end in a hurry before they are fully unfolded, which is not complete enough. A small deduction. Let's talk about the characters. Mi Feng is a good girl. I quite like her natural kindness, especially in the first half. The feeling of following the uncle in a daze and being very obedient is very refreshing. But in the second half, it seemed too natural. Maybe it's because I have a conservative personality. I think she didn't handle it very well when she used Feng Luo's account to "contract all the business", and even brought in new people at low prices. It's a good thing to be helpful, and it's completely understandable to want to improve Feng Luo's interpersonal and financial situation. But Feng Luo can be regarded as a master in the game. The impact of her actions may not be easily estimated. I have played online games. Every move of the game master is watched. He may even make it to the forum and become the laughing stock of everyone. The Xiaomi girl likes the uncle, and I don't think she wants to cause too much trouble for the uncle, right? Later, as soon as the uncle went online, he encountered various requests for help, which was obviously a bit of a headache. And does Xiaomi really think that the uncle's financial situation is so bad? In fact, I think the uncle's strength has been shown. Doesn't this lovely girl seem a bit needy and enthusiastic? Or should I tell my uncle first? Xiaomi girl still looks a bit white here, I'm sorry. However, in terms of the scene opposite the uncle, this girl's feelings are sincere and loyal, which is worthy of recognition. Touch the cute millet. As for Feng Luo, Brother Fan Shao... I think he is still very cute, but this cuteness became too much in the later stages. Uncle, irritable, sullen, awkward, successful... The combination of these would have had a great chemical effect, but Da Da didn't seem to grasp it very well. Many of Fan Shao's actions ruined Xiaomi's sincere feelings. A man's lack of security can be turned into a cute point, but Fan Shao's performance seems too childish. Especially when Xiaomi was also an insecure child, he did not shoulder his responsibilities as a man very well, but instead greatly broke the girl's heart. In the bloody plot, he was like a rag doll being played with, and he did not have the momentum of a mature man at all. He gave up easily when encountering some trivial things... I was a little disappointed. When I saw Xiaomi being abused, I even had the urge to abandon the article. The male protagonist is the decisive component in a romance. The uncle's performance made me have to deduct 5 points from this article, or even more. Let's talk about the supporting roles. I think a great advantage of this article is that the personality charm of the supporting characters is successfully created. Xiaomi's girlfriends are all very cute. Senior Brother Le, Sister Huatian, and Kuizhan all add a lot to this article... However, there are too many supporting characters and they are too brilliant, which also makes this article look a bit top-heavy. There are too few and too few descriptions of the relationship between Xiaomi and her uncle, and there are too few descriptions of Xiaomi and her uncle. The daily life of Mi and his best friend, the emotional development of the best friend, the entanglement of the male costar, and preparations for recruiting new people, etc., Make people anxious. After all, most people read the novel for the main romance. In my humble opinion, the bland plot should be reduced as much as possible. Finally, there is the ending... I have to say that I think the ending is a bit too deceptive, and a long time passed by indifferently. Where's the uncle? Uncle, is he still biting his handkerchief and regretting it? Biting too long! In the end, after going around in circles for a while... Xiaomi chose to take the initiative. Maybe it's because of the intense abuse at the beginning. Although I don't expect meaty meat, I still hope that the ending can be cured by sprinkling sugar... I'm just a guy who likes to have fun and be cute... I have been shamelessly pointing here for so long. The above opinions are only my personal opinions and I am not trying to criticize them. I just sincerely hope that the next article can be written better and provide us with more wonderful works~Bow down and crawl away~

Every time I reply, I want to motivate myself [You are not fighting alone] QAQ Secretary sister is really... ORZ Finished Spreading Flowers~Please give me a sequel, please give me a sequel

When I saw the bathtub, I suddenly thought of a sentence. After modification, it is: Just let the fish in and I will feed them to death (this is definitely a bad joke) It turns out that the uncle is still able to steal accounts, and his image collapsed instantly...

Out of curiosity, I checked Kuroko Tetsuya and found out that it was Kuroko's Basketball (this guy has only heard of and never seen OTZ If the secretary sister knew that BOSS's little girlfriend not only came from an online relationship, but that BOSS would also stare at the monitor and type games furiously and even howl like most otakus (is there any), I don't know what she would think*▽* The secretary sister is very smart, a salary increase will definitely be no problem, hahahahaha...

Sensational Bird Sensational Bird~ Did Xiaomi set the ringtone and alarm to be the same? = =

Wait a moment?! Why does this chapter also require VIP? (O_o) Well, since I'm v, let's put in two extra stories o(^_^)o

Secretary sister, what are you doing? == It's just harassment. . . That uncle driver is quite funny. If there is a new article, let him appear. XD Finally, I have a question, uncle, are you really afraid of black people?

=0=There is no TAT anymore