
[The Return of the Condor Heroes] Mochou
神雕之莫愁
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 28k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
11Chapters
1.1kFavorites
9.1Score
72Nutrient gifts
16.1kClicks per chapter
252Comments
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The writing is very good. Finally, I want to ask whether Hanyu's bed is very cold.
It feels so good to have quiet time. This is how senior sisters and junior sisters should be. I like it.
It feels good to watch the water flowing slowly and smoothly! The author writes well!
Although the article is not long, it is very interesting. I like it very much.
This kind of plainness looks very comfortable.
It took me more than ten minutes to read the article. I think the writing is very good, but you always have to say "How is it good?" When doing anything. This is just a detail, and I don't think you need to pay too much attention to it. The two people are inherently indifferent, and it can be reflected in how good they are. I really think your article is very good. I already like Li Mochou, and I am really curious about "Mojing", so I accidentally saw this when I was looking for an article. This novel is basically pure water literature, which makes people feel very comfortable when reading it. The content is also different from other novels. Mochou still became the red fairy who was feared by everyone in the world, but in the end he ended up with Long Entropy. What you wrote makes me fall in love with Li Mochou even more. We both traveled through time and became Li Mochou, but our experiences are different. I like yours more than others. The Li Mochou described by others is the opposite of Xiao Longnu in temperament, but the one described by you is the same, especially in the later chapters. At the beginning, I didn't believe that Xiao Longnu liked me, and thought that women couldn't love each other. It seemed that I wanted Xiao Longnu to fall in love with Yang Guo according to the plot development in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". But later, when Mochou went to the Jueqing Valley to save Xiao Longnu, I deeply felt Mochou's love for Xiao Longnu. The ending is a little disappointing, but according to the two people's personalities, they won't do anything that will make people blush. . . (Ahem, I mean teasing or something like that) In short, this article describes the fairy spirit of Little Dragon Girl. Although the article is short, her character makes people feel that there is not much difference with the Little Dragon Girl written by Mr. Jin Yong. It's getting late and I'm feeling sleepy. I can't write a long comment, so I can only say this. (By the way, I just went to test how many words there are, and it's actually 1,000. It's the first time I've written a long comment in my life.) Maybe you can't see it, but I still say, good night everyone.
Oh my God, I suddenly fell into Longchou's shoes these past two days. Teacher, you made me see a different Li Mochou. I am very honored to read this article 12 years later.
"Failure" is a big bug for the author~
The author's writing style is really good, but it's a pity that there are no new ones in recent years.
It's very well written, but it's too short and not enough to read.