
Long and Short Verses
长短句
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- 1k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- Modern Era
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- 22y ago
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Long sentences and short sentences. Endless love and hatred will lead to resentment and separation. .
... Personally, I think the whole paragraph with Fei in the middle is pure nonsense. I didn't even bother to read it, so I skipped it to the last three lines. In fact, the two paragraphs before "fei" can be directly connected to these three lines, and "she" is changed to "he". The middle is too wordy
The tone of the previous article is still very cheerful. . Got hit at the last moment
The sense of rhythm makes it easy to read, but not relaxing in your heart.
Fortunately, I didn't miss such a good article
This kind of person who is depressed and sad in his heart and looks calm and calm is more heart-wrenching than the kind of person who is crying and heartbroken. It's very painful for the protagonist to put everything into his mind. How long can he endure it?
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Moyin Pavilion: Full of profound philosophy, a rare good article Yuan Gungun 22:31:21 6/11/03 (no content) Insightful! Media 21:45:45 6/11/03 (no content) Good article! I recommend it! ^^ Lumei 21:17:39 6/11/03 (no content) Great article!!! Accsusp 21:12:12 6/11/03 (no content) When the love is strong, the love becomes weak, and when the pain is extreme, there is only one word! Xiaoyu Jiaxue 20:47:52 6/11/03 (no content) Calm enough!! It's really a good article~~ I like it, please wait for the next article! Liu Shui 20:26:38 6/11/03 (no content) I was just wondering why there were so many compliments. After reading it, I realized that it is really so good. Lily of the Valley 20:26:19 6/11/03 (No content) Good article, good article!!!!!!!!!!!! Going to work, fishing 20:01:36 6/11/03 (no content) Apply for reprinting: Reprint to Danmei Unlimited otto 19:57:38 6/11/03 (50) OK, thanks for reposting. Danmei No Limits has always been my favorite channel. Asrel 20:13:38 6/11/03 (no content) Thank you:) otto 20:19:34 6/11/03 (no content) Can I apply for reprinting? Khan, it's my first time to apply... That moment 19:53:30 6/11/03 (51) Unfortunately, I have already posted it there. Thank you again for liking this article~~ Asrel 20:17:00 6/11/03 (no content) Dahan, let me go and see if Ye Lu has been pushed through? What a pity not to push! That moment 20:19:20 6/11/03 (no content) Sigh, good article, all the rubbish I wrote should be burned, it's time to fertilize this article. That moment 19:48:13 6/11/03 (no content) Really good article~~~ Cute civet cat 19:39:37 6/11/03 (no content) Why do you feel like I'm reading Buddhist scriptures? Guoba 19:30:17 6/11/03 (no content) Good article. Crescent Tiger 19:27:37 6/11/03 (no content) Tanmei has no limit: The last sentence is really the highlight huhu 08:12:18 6/12/03 (62) Mixed feelings... Sauvignon 03:07:19 6/12/03 (709) There is only one word to express - good! Rednight 23:31:39 6/11/03 (no content) Light rainy desert night: The length of words is sometimes inversely proportional to the sadness in the heart. It's so heart-wrenching... Fortunately she didn't ask. Fortunately. Fortunately, the word "lucky" lingers in the air... Ailie (eyeshadow) 20:40:23 6/14/03 (129) The unforgettable sea: Is it really a short and affectionate sentence? I still feel that it ended so lightly because "I" didn't love enough:( Weird Blue 09:04:05 6/12/03 (18) Stick out your tongue... And hit me~~ Regardless of words, the heart is tacit. Bava 21:38:58 6/11/03 (111) The so-called words are really wonderful. When you are emotional, of course you mean every word. When you are guilty, long speeches are just to excuse yourself. When your heart is in pain, you are afraid that if you say one more word, you will not be able to support yourself. Let me look at the Chinese website: Sharp, silence is better than sound at this time Editor Yipinhou comments Article reply Replied by: Yu Yan Time: 2003-06-11 19:09:18 The topic is really good! Sure enough, it is a long and short sentence. That Jing seems really sensible and calm on the outside, but is she already in a turmoil inside? This kind of person who is depressed and sad in his heart and looks calm and calm is more heart-wrenching than the kind of person who is crying and heartbroken. A very touching short article, which made me feel sad after reading it. Replied by: genie Time: 2003-06-11 19:13:02 very short article breezy without a word So sad... Replied by: Xin Yi Time: 2003-06-11 22:48:00 The most effective part of a short story is at the end, one or two words that completely hit the point. It's just that whether you can see through it or not, it's actually the same. It doesn't necessarily make you less sad or more proud. Replied by: Fat Baby Time: 2003-06-12 00:33:29 Like! (It actually follows the principle of long and short sentences) Replied by: BlueFish Time: 2003-06-12 01:57:34 So good! It's a short article, but I won't forget it after reading it. Replied by: BlueFish Time: 2003-06-12 02:03:06 Waiting for "Fahrenheit"! Replied by: Zero month Time: 2003-06-13 23:20:21 Very good article. I like short articles like this. The writing is very skillful and the title is also very good. Replied by: Xinyi Time: 2003-06-13 23:40:26 Night moon flying: ^_^ nice story... But quite sad na blurblur 15:23:59 6/23/03 (no content) Goodbye this article, new feelings... Wu Xian 15:17:54 6/23/03 (422) Although I don't write much about love stories, I have always believed that love is just the seasoning salt of life. Without salt, life may become tasteless, but there are many other things in life worth pursuing, not to mention soy sauce without salt. It's one thing to be full of longing for relationships, but reality is often unsatisfactory. Even if two people still have sincere feelings, sometimes they still have to face separation. When faced with a blow, be strong! I am not a love nihilist, but I am not a lover of love. So I did a psychological test with my friends a while ago, and my result was: For me, bread is far more important than love. (To be honest, I was a little shocked) Treat love as life? Or as life? Problem? Xrrs 15:22:25 6/23/03 (no content) yeah WuXian 15:32:23 6/23/03 (no content) God, these homophones are so annoying! "" Is labeled ""... Wu Xian 15:20:25 6/23/03 (no content) One word "good" mimily916 14:43:47 6/23/03 (no content) Laughing, I saw this article again, and I recommend it! Retweeting a good article a hundred times is never too many! That moment 14:02:46 6/23/03 (no content)
Well, every time I pose an article, I always hold a clear idea of the possible inflections from reads of different kinds. From their messages, rough pictures of their backgrounds such as ages, values are easily obtained. To be honest, I'm quite a critical one, both to my readers as well as to myself. I'm sorry to say that the article is not
Am i 2 stupid or what?? I don't get it. ?-?