[Snarky Version]
Those who get up early are medical students and junk collectors; those who stay up late are medical students and massage parlor workers.
Those who can't eat on time are medical students and beggars; those who live in fear are medical students and criminals.
Those who work overtime without compensatory leave are medical students and street vendors; those who can't afford to misspeak are medical students and TV hosts.
Those who find it hard to quit once they've joined are medical students and □□; and most importantly, those who get hacked to death are medical students and gangsters!
After reading all that, do you still want to study medicine?
[Poetic Version]
How far is a distance of seventeen years?
It is the distance between a girl who knew nothing of love and a woman who has grown calm and untroubled.
It is the distance between a man transformed by the passage of time into someone dazzling, and the moment he dares to confess his love to the girl he has cherished since childhood.
Seventeen years later, they meet again. She doesn't remember him, and he doesn't know that love has left her wounded and afraid to love again.
Their repeated encounters stir up memories of the past, and let sealed-away feelings slip out...
Her heart, cold as ashes, is rekindled by the tiny flame he brings. Perhaps that flame burns too fiercely.
My dear, it turns out Heaven made me suffer all those hardships so I could meet you again, when I had become the best version of myself.
[Announcement]
Sorry, it's been several years, and I only just remembered that I never finished updating this. Maybe no one remembers it anymore, but I'll post the rest anyway and call it complete.
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My completed stories
Portal: When Love Is Shallow, It Still Bewitches (Jianghu)
Portal: Endless Intentions (Palace Intrigue)
Portal: A Thousand Years of Longing (Transmigration)
Theme:
The writing is very good, and the psychological description of the characters is very good. Sometimes it feels like what we are thinking in our hearts.
The male protagonist seems to be perfect so far, with no flaws. The heroine is also good, a very upright and principled doctor.
Sure enough, life is unpredictable, so pitiful, 555...
I hope that future plots will become more and more powerful and exciting, haha!
1. Title part:
The title of this article is quite literary, and I personally think it is more suitable for the style. □ Recently, one-word or two-word article titles have become popular. Of course, there are advantages and disadvantages: the advantage is that the recommended position is at the front, which has an attractive effect; but I personally think that the disadvantages are also quite large. One or two words sometimes cannot summarize the full text, and it often makes readers confused. Therefore, I think that the most suitable one is the best, and it does not necessarily mean that questions with four or five words are unattractive.
2. Copywriting part:
To be honest, it was the author's professional identity that attracted me at first. The doctor is a very professional female protagonist. In addition, the male protagonist is an entertainment star. The sparks between the two unrelated circles are very exciting. I think this introduction is the highlight, and the rest is relatively cliche.
PS: I really don't like to say in copywriting that my articles are "slowly gaining popularity". What Internet articles want is surprise at first sight. Apart from the farming article, which can have a grueling reason, I really can't think of a reason to tell readers that this article is slow to gain popularity. You might as well save it first. There are so many online articles that most readers can't wait.
3. Text part:
A conscientious and beautiful doctor in her thirties and a popular male star in her twenties. Although they are childhood sweethearts who have had an affair for many years, I think Chu Chu accepted it too quickly. Her swing and struggle should have been longer, that is, it would have been better to torture her for a while longer and struggle for a while.
In addition, as an entertainment star, Xiao Ji's aura is still a bit weak. Even if he is deliberately gentle when facing the heroine, in a cruel competitive society, he will still unconsciously show his arrogance and celebrity airs. This point needs to be greatly enhanced in description, starting from the details. For example, he must drink a certain brand of water, and all staff must be punctual when making program announcements, etc.
The man surnamed Gu must be a troublemaker, and he suddenly appeared again in the increasingly heated relationship between the two. If this kind of male supporting character was not tender and devoted to the heroine, readers would definitely be slapped to death, and they would still wait and see for his appearance.
In addition, I noticed that in some chapters, due to the distribution of word count, a scene or the heroine's memory fragment was divided into two chapters. Although it was suspenseful, it was not very comfortable to read. I don't know if it was my personal feeling or something else.
PS: I'm glad I didn't see any obvious punctuation errors or typos. I am a person with obsessive-compulsive disorder. Even if I chat online, I cannot tolerate typos. I think this is the appearance of an author's work and the minimum respect for readers. It takes two or three hours to write an article. Reading and checking it takes ten minutes is not too much. Generally speaking, I find that this article is full of typos and I don't know how to use punctuation. Even if it is written by a great author, I will abandon it because I feel tired. Big thumbs up for this.
I really like this kind of writing that doesn't follow fashion. It won't travel for the sake of time travel, nor will it be the president for the sake of the president. Every line is quiet and calm, especially when I see the heroine reminiscing about her emotions in college. I believe many people will resonate with me. The little girl's shyness and fear of getting hurt were carefully grasped, and her few words made people's eyes sore.
So if you don't establish a glorious image as a good supporting actor, Gu Tongxiao, I will mercilessly ask the author to kill you and maim you...
All in all, this is an article suitable for reading in one sitting on a cool night.
There are children's shoes downstairs. Does this sentence make you think of something un-CJ? Cover your face ~ Why is Mao trying to mislead the Lun family ~
It has been in my favorites for a long time, haha, there are already so many more, the author is so diligent!
In my opinion, the female protagonist seems to accept the male protagonist a little faster, but for many people, they may feel that they don't have enough JQ~ Haha~
After reading this chapter, I believe that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is even more indestructible. I hope the author will not be too cruel. But it seems unlikely.
"It seems like here, sometimes it hurts a little down there."
Wow, the poster is indeed a medical major~ I feel really sad.
The writing is pretty good ~ thumbs up
Received it, I will take a closer look when I have time
I just read your article, and I think the theme is pretty good. The writing style and the main line are very good. It would be better if the characters' personality traits were more distinct and the plot had more twists and turns. As a reader, I appreciate you very much, but there are still some small flaws in the article. I hope to discuss it with you. My penguin, the wandering of the pen tip ~ (from Liaoning), believe me, you will not be disappointed.
You can do some publicity on the forum, it will be much better, the writing is very good!
Big, awesome! Good story.
The writing is very good, and the psychological description of the characters is very good. Sometimes it feels like what we are thinking in our hearts. The male protagonist seems to be perfect so far, with no flaws. The heroine is also good, a very upright and principled doctor.
Sure enough, life is unpredictable, so pitiful, 555... I hope that future plots will become more and more powerful and exciting, haha!
1. Title part: The title of this article is quite literary, and I personally think it is more suitable for the style. □ Recently, one-word or two-word article titles have become popular. Of course, there are advantages and disadvantages: the advantage is that the recommended position is at the front, which has an attractive effect; but I personally think that the disadvantages are also quite large. One or two words sometimes cannot summarize the full text, and it often makes readers confused. Therefore, I think that the most suitable one is the best, and it does not necessarily mean that questions with four or five words are unattractive. 2. Copywriting part: To be honest, it was the author's professional identity that attracted me at first. The doctor is a very professional female protagonist. In addition, the male protagonist is an entertainment star. The sparks between the two unrelated circles are very exciting. I think this introduction is the highlight, and the rest is relatively cliche. PS: I really don't like to say in copywriting that my articles are "slowly gaining popularity". What Internet articles want is surprise at first sight. Apart from the farming article, which can have a grueling reason, I really can't think of a reason to tell readers that this article is slow to gain popularity. You might as well save it first. There are so many online articles that most readers can't wait. 3. Text part: A conscientious and beautiful doctor in her thirties and a popular male star in her twenties. Although they are childhood sweethearts who have had an affair for many years, I think Chu Chu accepted it too quickly. Her swing and struggle should have been longer, that is, it would have been better to torture her for a while longer and struggle for a while. In addition, as an entertainment star, Xiao Ji's aura is still a bit weak. Even if he is deliberately gentle when facing the heroine, in a cruel competitive society, he will still unconsciously show his arrogance and celebrity airs. This point needs to be greatly enhanced in description, starting from the details. For example, he must drink a certain brand of water, and all staff must be punctual when making program announcements, etc. The man surnamed Gu must be a troublemaker, and he suddenly appeared again in the increasingly heated relationship between the two. If this kind of male supporting character was not tender and devoted to the heroine, readers would definitely be slapped to death, and they would still wait and see for his appearance. In addition, I noticed that in some chapters, due to the distribution of word count, a scene or the heroine's memory fragment was divided into two chapters. Although it was suspenseful, it was not very comfortable to read. I don't know if it was my personal feeling or something else. PS: I'm glad I didn't see any obvious punctuation errors or typos. I am a person with obsessive-compulsive disorder. Even if I chat online, I cannot tolerate typos. I think this is the appearance of an author's work and the minimum respect for readers. It takes two or three hours to write an article. Reading and checking it takes ten minutes is not too much. Generally speaking, I find that this article is full of typos and I don't know how to use punctuation. Even if it is written by a great author, I will abandon it because I feel tired. Big thumbs up for this. I really like this kind of writing that doesn't follow fashion. It won't travel for the sake of time travel, nor will it be the president for the sake of the president. Every line is quiet and calm, especially when I see the heroine reminiscing about her emotions in college. I believe many people will resonate with me. The little girl's shyness and fear of getting hurt were carefully grasped, and her few words made people's eyes sore. So if you don't establish a glorious image as a good supporting actor, Gu Tongxiao, I will mercilessly ask the author to kill you and maim you... All in all, this is an article suitable for reading in one sitting on a cool night.
There are children's shoes downstairs. Does this sentence make you think of something un-CJ? Cover your face ~ Why is Mao trying to mislead the Lun family ~
It has been in my favorites for a long time, haha, there are already so many more, the author is so diligent! In my opinion, the female protagonist seems to accept the male protagonist a little faster, but for many people, they may feel that they don't have enough JQ~ Haha~ After reading this chapter, I believe that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is even more indestructible. I hope the author will not be too cruel. But it seems unlikely.
"It seems like here, sometimes it hurts a little down there." Wow, the poster is indeed a medical major~ I feel really sad. The writing is pretty good ~ thumbs up
Received it, I will take a closer look when I have time
I just read your article, and I think the theme is pretty good. The writing style and the main line are very good. It would be better if the characters' personality traits were more distinct and the plot had more twists and turns. As a reader, I appreciate you very much, but there are still some small flaws in the article. I hope to discuss it with you. My penguin, the wandering of the pen tip ~ (from Liaoning), believe me, you will not be disappointed.
You can do some publicity on the forum, it will be much better, the writing is very good!