A Midsummer Night's Dream
夏夜之梦
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 20y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
288Clicks per chapter
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夏夜之梦
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Once again, some PP opinions may improve it.
One more suggestion, you can try writing more in each chapter. This will not only increase readers, but also score more points.
Work hard and try harder!!
Thank you PP for your opinion, I will work hard on it in future articles!
The first feeling is that the article is not divided into paragraphs well; the second feeling is that the punctuation marks are not used well; the last feeling is that the language of the article is not mature enough, there will be inconsistent language in the sentences, and the plot unfolds too fast, which makes people feel abrupt. There will be a feeling of disconnection between sentences. Language can only be improved by working hard and writing more, and you will definitely be able to do this. However, it is commendable that the description of the character's appearance is very detailed. If you add a better sense of proportion, the article will be even better.