[Prince of Tennis] Once Young

Although it's a little messy in the middle, it's still super good! ! I like this light feeling the most!

Sanada is a big bastard in this article. . . . Just dump him hard once

Not bad, it feels like a montage~~

Like it very much! ! ! It's just too short! Read it all in one go! Not enough. . . >~<

I cried when I watched it... In the middle of the night... I said that I dreamed about this plot before I went to bed. It was great! !

I understand... I cried when I saw it... I cried when I saw Yukimura talking about her when Nanashi broke out. There was only one thought in my mind, let Nanashi and Yuno make a lily! ! ! ! !

Hehe I read a big novel in one sitting in the middle of the night~ I always feel very comfortable among the big mosquitoes Just like spring and autumn short season But it's gentler than winter and summer Clearly giving me a sense of helplessness Yet so gentle as the wind Come on > <

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, Jinjiang smoked again If possible, delete it... By the way, can a 0-point rating be deleted = =

I read your article in one sitting. When I first watched it, I honestly didn't feel much about it, but there was no obvious reading difficulty. Because I watched it while jumping. There is nothing eye-catching, no eye-catching part that attracts people to read on. It's the kind of person who laughs it off after reading it and doesn't remember anything. So I read it a second time, and even went to your column to check the publication time. Yes, "Summer Night" is obviously much better than "Once Upon a Time". We put the two articles together and compared them, and found the same problem: they cannot withstand scrutiny. The complex is so abrupt that there is almost no buffer. Just like when Yuu goes to Europe, who is Yuu or Yuichi? You basically didn't mention this at all in your previous article. Moreover, there is a section in the middle where the pronouns are confusing. Unexplained incidents often occur. Some of your sentences are indeed very good and beautiful, but because of the words in front of them that make people impatient to read, they lose their artistic conception. Well, then in "When I Was Young", Genichiro Sanada collapsed. If you have never watched King of Nets and see the character you created, you will think that this person is really a scumbag. This is not Genichiro Sanada, the powerful and arrogant emperor-like, upright young man. I don't understand why some people always think that Sanada and Tezuka are facial paralysis or icebergs. Obviously they would laugh, even though it was rare. Even if it is, it doesn't mean heartless, let alone heartless. Well, let me think about it, it's still character creation. Alas, who is this? It turns out there are so many people with the same name as Seiichi Yukimura in this world. With this feeling, Seiichi Yukimura in your article, how can I really put it, is more of a stranger than a stranger. After watching it, I have no impression at all. At least your portrayal of Genichiro Sanada can make people sigh, this person is really a scumbag. The existence of Yukimura Seiichi is too vague, like a shadow, a shadow that is so blurry that its outline cannot be seen. Well, then there is the emotional part. In "When I Was Young", there is basically no emotional progression. The final ending is still the same two words: abrupt. To be honest, in your article "Once Upon a Time", if I didn't read the CP written in the copy, I really wouldn't know who was following whom. By the way, in your article, I can't feel that they have changed or stayed the same. The character creation is too vague. The only person who left a slight impression on me was Yuichi. Later, because of your subsequent plot, the feeling of this person was lost to me. Sorry, I didn't catch your hint in the following article. Because you can't see it at all. Your expression is too cryptic, so cryptic that you don't even have much side description. Then there's the matter of your time. It's confusing to be honest, but it's not impossible to see. If you are not the kind of reader who likes your writing very much, or is a reader who is very familiar with your writing style, you will never be able to tell. Alas, I have forgotten your article now. I don't even remember the person's name. Finally, when I read your author's words, I discovered that the theme of this article was originally Qilan's growth. The theme is not obvious, no, it can even be said to be covered up. In the end, it can be said that Qarashi became a bystander. I became Qarashi to watch the story of Yuichi and Xian Ichiro. Qarashi's feelings are more or less in words, but they are not obvious. By the end, this article almost gave me the feeling that this article was actually written in the first person. Before I knew it, there were only so many words. Please forgive me if I hit you too hard. The above are purely personal opinions. That's it, done.

We are chasing after you from Liuchuan, this is MDL, Momo. I don't know why I really like Nai's narrative style and writing style... It's very comfortable, like the sea breeze in summer, beautiful.