Liuli sighed and said softly, “People should live like drifting clouds and flowing water, letting things take their natural course. Sadly, I’ve never managed that. So I can never be cherished, much less be happy.”
The author murmured, “Li, could you please stop being so gloomy? This isn’t the style I wanted.”
Liuli shot her a sharp look. “Then what style do you want, you little brat?”
The author lowered her voice even more. “This story is supposed to stick to the comedy... Lady Liuli.”
“So who’s more important, the author or the main character?”
I was speechless. “The author’s vision is important too.”
“Do you not even treat the protagonist like a person? Can’t I be profound for once?”
“You’re right,” the author conceded. Good grief.
“You may leave now.” Lady Liuli really was cold. I was sweating buckets.
“Yes, ma’am. This humble one takes his leave.”
Now let me end the comedy in grand style and get straight to the angst...
★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★
I’ve started digging a new pit. While writing this story, I felt I hadn’t explained Bian Mo’s story clearly, so I decided to write another story in the same series and clear up what happened to Bian Mo along the way.
So I wrote Our Naked Gaze. It follows a realistic path.
That one may be updated faster.
Here’s the link: Our Naked Gaze (http://www.jjwxc.com/onebook.php?novelid=265619)
Wait~
Don't care too much about click-through rates
If you want to improve, you must first learn what persistence is
Stop feeling sorry for yourself, trust me, it's useless. Our situation is similar. You are still early. When I wrote more than 50,000, the click-through rate just exceeded 100. It is now more than 160,000, and the first chapter has just exceeded 1,000, with a collection of 84. So don't be discouraged and write slowly.
I said, when will Xiaoxia start a "happy life"?
The writing feels really good and very real!
The other thing is that it's not that I don't feel good when I kiss a girl, it's that I don't feel good when I kiss someone I don't feel good about! Hehe, the writing is quite good!
Su Da, don't belittle yourself, your writing is good!
Come on! So far, there has been no substantial progress between the two protagonists! The author replied:
It's been laying the groundwork. It would be so unnatural to do everything right from the start. ... There will be substantial progress in the next few chapters, don't worry.
It's indeed a pretty good article.
In fact, the article is really good, but it is updated too slowly. As a result, the points cannot keep up and fewer people click on it! Su Da, come on! Author's reply:
Sorry, I haven't seen this message before. I heard someone say before that he was the bottleneck in every word... I felt that even though I wasn't that great, I still had a lot of trouble to deal with.
For example, I originally planned to write it as EG, but now I find that I can't write it at all... The before and after are actually two completely different feelings. The scene where Bian Mo and Xiao Xia Tong Xi met for the first time felt awkward to me... So I was very conflicted. What I hope most now is that everyone just ignores the first few chapters... If possible, read from the back to the front, and stop when you can't stand it...
In short, what I want to write now is more focused on human psychology, so you can take a look...
I don't expect high scores for this article either… I just hope everyone is happy to read it.
PS: Happy New Year. Good luck in the coming year.
Work has finally started! It's not easy!
In fact, after reading Su Nian's writing, I thought it was pretty good. The writing was very real and life-like. I usually watch Danmei a lot when I'm in JJ, and I especially like time travel stories. So after reading a lot of content from YY, I felt that Su Da's writing was more realistic and kind. Also, the child Liuli was so pitiful that it hurt my heart! Xiao Bianba is also a gentle and modest gentleman. I guess he will develop into a competent Xiaogong in the future... Hehe, I am still looking forward to it, but the speed of updating the article is quite slow! Come on! Author's reply:
I'm taking a break from my busy schedule. I've been really nervous lately. The final exam is coming soon. The updates may be very slow recently. Those who are waiting for the article should go to other pits for a while. . . Sorry
This is the first time I have written a long story, and I am still learning from and thinking about many aspects. It is really not smooth when writing. I want to try to make the idea as perfect as possible. I should take my time, but I will never give up. Winter vacation will be faster.
Thank you Susie for your attention. Bow.
Wait~ Don't care too much about click-through rates If you want to improve, you must first learn what persistence is
Stop feeling sorry for yourself, trust me, it's useless. Our situation is similar. You are still early. When I wrote more than 50,000, the click-through rate just exceeded 100. It is now more than 160,000, and the first chapter has just exceeded 1,000, with a collection of 84. So don't be discouraged and write slowly.
I said, when will Xiaoxia start a "happy life"?
The writing feels really good and very real! The other thing is that it's not that I don't feel good when I kiss a girl, it's that I don't feel good when I kiss someone I don't feel good about! Hehe, the writing is quite good!
Su Da, don't belittle yourself, your writing is good!
Come on! So far, there has been no substantial progress between the two protagonists! The author replied: It's been laying the groundwork. It would be so unnatural to do everything right from the start. ... There will be substantial progress in the next few chapters, don't worry.
It's indeed a pretty good article.
In fact, the article is really good, but it is updated too slowly. As a result, the points cannot keep up and fewer people click on it! Su Da, come on! Author's reply: Sorry, I haven't seen this message before. I heard someone say before that he was the bottleneck in every word... I felt that even though I wasn't that great, I still had a lot of trouble to deal with. For example, I originally planned to write it as EG, but now I find that I can't write it at all... The before and after are actually two completely different feelings. The scene where Bian Mo and Xiao Xia Tong Xi met for the first time felt awkward to me... So I was very conflicted. What I hope most now is that everyone just ignores the first few chapters... If possible, read from the back to the front, and stop when you can't stand it... In short, what I want to write now is more focused on human psychology, so you can take a look... I don't expect high scores for this article either… I just hope everyone is happy to read it. PS: Happy New Year. Good luck in the coming year.
Work has finally started! It's not easy!
In fact, after reading Su Nian's writing, I thought it was pretty good. The writing was very real and life-like. I usually watch Danmei a lot when I'm in JJ, and I especially like time travel stories. So after reading a lot of content from YY, I felt that Su Da's writing was more realistic and kind. Also, the child Liuli was so pitiful that it hurt my heart! Xiao Bianba is also a gentle and modest gentleman. I guess he will develop into a competent Xiaogong in the future... Hehe, I am still looking forward to it, but the speed of updating the article is quite slow! Come on! Author's reply: I'm taking a break from my busy schedule. I've been really nervous lately. The final exam is coming soon. The updates may be very slow recently. Those who are waiting for the article should go to other pits for a while. . . Sorry This is the first time I have written a long story, and I am still learning from and thinking about many aspects. It is really not smooth when writing. I want to try to make the idea as perfect as possible. I should take my time, but I will never give up. Winter vacation will be faster. Thank you Susie for your attention. Bow.