Secrets of the Moon Palace

Repeatedly... Typo. My eyes were instantly filled with a deep blue. This sentence doesn't quite make sense. After reading the entire article, I couldn't help but develop the bad habit of nitpicking.

The short story's structure is somewhat rushed, and some of the leaps in thought feel rather empty. However, I still felt that the overall writing style was very relaxed, and the writing skills were not weak. Here's a little flower as a reward!

Sister Su Su, I'll keep adding points!

Following Sister Su Su's instructions~~~~Bonus points