
[Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfic] Reversal
[钢炼同人]逆
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 34k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 14y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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16Chapters
157Favorites
8.5Score
2.6kClicks per chapter
57Comments
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I haven't been to Jinjiang for a few months. I was browsing Weibo a few days ago and saw Ed's diary today and suddenly thought of Ed, so I ran up to read this article... It should be regarded as my favorite ending. It has growth and other things, and is more real. When we are together, we always prefer the feeling of a princess and a prince's love, but this is also good for girls... But how to put it, maybe it's because Ed is the true first love [unmistakable], and I cry more miserably = = I always feel that I still want more sugar residue = =I think girls should be able to travel around the world with Ed to save the Earth Army [Otome Heart QAQ, let's do some extra bathroom play [Mud Dirt]. In fact, I personally think that Ed written by Sister Yao is quite good. Anyway, I don't have any sense of disobedience. Every time I see every move of Ed written by Sister Yao, especially his smile, I burst into tears. [I hit a wall, especially the part about girls, and I just made up Ed in my head. The scene where he is so handsome that he is so handsome QAQ, I really want to cry... I think Ed is always a warm person QAQ, I really like him no matter what, he is very sunny, not the kind of weak campus sunshine, I should say he is full of masculinity [? Well, what I particularly like is that he is very determined and his eyes are always nice. Obviously the protagonist is a girl, but all eyes are focused on Ed. I'm sorry [kneel down. I always feel like I'm completely out of my mind... [Then I hit the wall
Fortunately, fortunately, it's over.
Alas, they separated after all. Even if they chased each other, they still separated in the end. . . . . . . . . . Why
Ah ah ah, we are not together as expected. Cover your face... I don't know what to say, Ayao. Although I really hope that the two of them can be together, reality is always full of all kinds of helpless things. There are gatherings and separations, love and hate. The process of growing up always makes people wrestling and struggling. But no matter what, growth is necessary, and being suitable for each other does not necessarily mean being together. I always feel that Ayao's writing has become better. Maybe it's because we haven't seen each other for a long time? It seems a bit late to say it now, but I still want to say congratulations to end it. By the way, Dayao, you are really impatient... I don't have enough time to write a long review, so I can only write down my fragmentary thoughts and so on. Reading this chapter makes me want to cry. Those who can let go calmly either don't love deeply, or they love too deeply and have seen the ending in advance. The first encounter is for the final separation, so even if you are reluctant to let go, you know that letting go is the most suitable ending for each other. Well, I don't even know what I'm talking about. Anyway, this ending is the most suitable for them. After finally finishing the college entrance examination, I read the article and found that this article was finished. When I saw such an ending, I... I was so depressed that I wanted to cry, Dayao, I really wanted to punch the wall and cover my face. So, let's work on Dayao's new articles! =3=
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I hate it
=33333=I still came to leave a message... What is TE... [Death Well... If the girl doesn't want to go back to that dream demon, it can only end like this. Maybe the ending is really like this =-=
Congratulations on the completion>.<~~~Looking forward to the tutoring article.
I knew it wasn't HE from the beginning, but I continued reading without hesitation. A rare alchemical text. I'm still sad! Woohoo~
BEBEBEBEBE…[Infinite loop Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! I am completely in love with the BE written by my senior sister! Even if we can't fall in love, we are lucky to meet each other! EhOh, this is so much like the forbidden love between twins! Hey hey hey!
I always feel that it would have been better if we had not met each other in the beginning. Perhaps if we had not met in the beginning, we would not have the pain of separation. …But if we had never met, there wouldn't be so many tender things to remember. So even if we can't be together, it would be a very happy thing if we could meet, right?