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A curse is sometimes the cruelest reminder.
Revenge is sometimes the most futile salvation.
Human nature is sometimes the most potent poison.
The soul is sometimes the most fragile glass.
-----God Child
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"We all came together because of the darkness within each other...
So..."
[Stop saying "farewell" as if it were so easy. That's such an irresponsible thing to say.]
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Nana Li
Ah hey! That's a kiss... That's a kiss, right?!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh~ I discovered a problem, and I'm going to say it here. When changing scenes, the transition should be natural. Sometimes the switch is too fast and the reader can't keep up.
Again... You are not my drow... How sad
It's so sad for our protagonist to grow up in such an environment in a family with no blood ties.
One of the drawbacks of writing fantasy novels is how to tell readers the fantasy world you set up? Seeing this, I think it can be said that Luo~ your plot structure is very good, the description and writing are very good, but there are too many characters. I also have this problem. Well, I am also a newbie in fantasy, so let's work hard together.
Fighting is painful... Well... I understand your pain. A very good reader also said this to me before, saying that she would skip that paragraph mainly because there was a lack of something that could catch the eye (for my article). In this case, I have to be more elusive
It's such a complicated feeling, it's so painful to have responsibility and emotion intertwined. You are not my destined person... I am not your drow. This is so sad.
Excited, isn't it? Destiny finally allowed two people to meet. By the way, the girl appeared like an archangel.
Very theatrical~~ There is a pervasive feeling of sadness in the whole chapter. No matter how many times you can't save that person's life, this is such a heartbreaking thing...
Hmm~~The previous sentence about Zall is very meaningful. The subsequent scene seems like seeing seven ghosts and gods~ I look forward to such a loving combination as a magical partner!