
Lost Love [Image-Based Fanfiction]
逝爱[图片衍生]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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1Chapters
6Favorites
8.0Score
2.7kClicks per chapter
9Comments
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Reader comments 9
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As expected, it's a bit of a cheat without explanation, and it seems a little rushed. It would be better if it could be expanded into a series of supernatural stories.
In fact, at the beginning, I felt that I was missing my lost lover. It was not until the end that I realized that it was the woman who did it. At first reaction, this flashback method is a bit like the most perfect girl, but the subject matter is still very novel, which will make people have the urge to read it all at once. Wu Sheng's writing style is very good, I haven't noticed it before~ After all, the story is too short. I don't know why the heroine chose to kill her lover, but the jealousy of love and the desire for exclusivity can make people crazy. If he dies, he will not fall in love with others. If he dies, he will belong to me forever... Various thoughts and eternal expectations. It is not a particularly strange thing for the heroine to choose to kill the person she loves the most... I look forward to Wu Sheng writing a long story and explaining the process clearly. She should be more loving~
Short stories also need to be written carefully, as some things are not explained clearly.
Weakly means that I don't understand - -,
On the same summer afternoon, he suddenly suffered a myocardial infarction and left her, going to the place called heaven, and she was afraid she would never meet him again. This sentence. . . I've always been awkward. . . Also, I always feel that Mu doesn't stand out from Luci. . . It's a pity that I wrote about her face, hands, and how amazing she is~ I think it should be more detailed~
Horrible? I don't think so…
Supernatural things are the most lovable...
You, you are deliberately not letting me sleep! This is in the middle of the night!
Love knows no boundaries, let alone time and space, hahaha, I love that little suspense-like unfinished ellipsis,