The Prince of Tennis: Cross-Swap

It's pretty good, the writing is good, but the middle part is too rushed.

I want to cry in the next few chapters

It's good to be back, Xiaokui, this is your fence... Do you still remember me? ? No matter what, I still like your article very much. I haven't read it for a long time and I feel like I can't connect to QAQ. Is that Yiede a fan of Ninzu-kun? Phew, I will still support you

Aa

Updates are a bit slow, I haven't been online for a long time, so updates are not that much. . Hope it's faster. . . Speaking of which, if I went to school today, I would see Xiaokui kicking me out of the reader group, which is so sad. . . It seems that you are the first person to add me to the readership list. I only added a few readers that I particularly like. . No more than 5. . Xiaokui, you hurt my heart so much, so sad. . .

It's so fun to watch hahaha~ But if you want to write better articles, it's best to pay attention to the following points... 1. The characters should be more distinctive. Personality, appearance, identity, talents... The author's goal should be to create a character that is so unique that it is memorable and will never be confused with any other character in the world! The same goes for event settings. 2. Too deliberate complaints - especially complaints from the author, can easily interrupt the reader's sense of reality when reading and reduce their emotional investment, so use with caution. 3. Many Lei Ri comics have protagonists with Chinese backgrounds... I think it's okay, but from all aspects of the heroine, there is no trace of living in rural China for more than ten years. So why is this setting necessary? Is it convenient to make complaints with Chinese characteristics? The subsequent complaints exceeded my psychological limits as an old man, so I stopped reading. The overall feeling is that you have reached a certain level of writing and are at the bifurcation of two writing paths: "being comfortable but making little progress" and "working hard to hone your strength". Make a choice, girl!

It's depressing... I've been watching so much lately and I really miss the relaxed style... Come back soon...

Well, that depends on Xipi... If the Xipi in the Hunter's Pit is Hisoka, I will definitely not be able to stand it...

I discovered it, I discovered it... It's so loving, hahaha... But I have to say that the author is so slow... (This is not to rush the article, definitely not...)

Where did Shinohara-san go... Could it be that she went to see Amu?