[HP/Twilight] Witch's Blood
As the title says, HP is the supporting setting, while Twilight is the main one. First: I'm a little Slytherin witch, and I used to be classmates with Snape. Before all this, I was just an ordinary high school student. After sleepwalking one night, I transmigrated into the world of HP. Since multiple people transmigrating together is all the rage these days, I had no idea whether I was some cannon-fodder character, so I planned to quietly play an insignificant passerby. Of course, that was only a dream~ Just when I finally managed to get myself killed off as cannon fodder, I didn't go back. Instead, I fell into the legendary Twilight world. This time, my transmigration was even more miserable. Does this mean there's no hope of going home...? Fine. I played cannon fodder as a passerby last time, but now it looks like I'll have to overthrow the cannon-fodder role and become the protagonist. That way, I won't die without even knowing how it happened. Speaking of which, how did I die last time??
Second: The heroine isn't all-powerful, so she knows her limits~
P.S. The main story officially ended at 13:13 on August 12. The rest is bonus chapters in progress~~ Other completed stories by Cat:
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Apart from his name, he has nothing to do with the characters in the original work.
This article is bullshit. The author's views are already problematic.
The author wrote down the characteristics of Slytherin to pieces. Lucius was also overwhelmed.
The author's writing is, well... A little white, a little dry. I don't mean to criticize, just making suggestions. The love between Jasper and the heroine (?) Was too hasty at the beginning. Even though Jasper is not the hero, I thought that Jasper's character was already in the book and he was very wary. Therefore, it was unreasonable for the author's Jasper to bring the heroine with him at the beginning just because of her blood problem, and the character was slightly broken. Let's not talk about the characters, just the plot. The author could actually add something during the time when they rely on each other and help each other. I guess that the first love with Jasper was actually the purest. This love passed so quickly that he could die for the other later, which was very baffling. His relationship with A Luo is also equally unclear. These are suggestions for relationships. In fact, I also had these problems when writing articles before. I thought that the pain, love, friendship, hatred of the characters... Were portrayed very deeply. In fact, when looking at it from the other side, many parts are unclear and the expressions are not smooth. It can be written better, and the more changes will be made, the better.
There are also authors who failed to describe Lucius in the HP world (that is definitely not the "Platinum Noble Peacock Dad" in my mind), and some characteristics of the Snake King (you know) were not found at all. There is a question: "Is this a professor?" In fact, there is a lot to write about in the HP world, such as: Narcissa's entanglement, Voldemort's inexplicable closeness (Voldemort is by no means an unsuspecting person)
The most important thing is, Lily! Homosexuality can be written beautifully. When I saw Narcissa's "Why does my heart hurt" (I think it was this sentence) at the end of the article, I felt like oh my god! You're kidding, it's too abrupt. The foreshadowing can be appropriate in the previous article, and readers will have a vague guess that this kind of love will be beautiful!
In short, the author's writing will be better, I believe. (Again, this is not a provocation, just a suggestion)
ps my first long review
pps The author's subject matter is very novel and his imagination is rich.
The author is perverted! The article is rubbish! It's so meaningless! Don't waste everyone's time by writing articles in the future
Comrades who have not jumped into the trap, I sincerely recommend that you stop jumping into the trap. This article is too capricious and inconsistent.
It's weird, appendix, the relationship between Narcissa and Aro is not clear, it's a bad ending, and the reason why the heroine died is not even written.
Feel free to write it boldly... It's good that Arrow is the male protagonist... At that time, Jasper and the female protagonist were separated, which was actually missed, and now there are Alice and the Cullens in the middle... There should be no better choice for the two of them besides friends...
Not bad, but I feel like the later pictures are a bit confusing.
All the feelings can only turn into a long sigh, hey~
Apart from his name, he has nothing to do with the characters in the original work.
This article is bullshit. The author's views are already problematic.
The author wrote down the characteristics of Slytherin to pieces. Lucius was also overwhelmed.
The author's writing is, well... A little white, a little dry. I don't mean to criticize, just making suggestions. The love between Jasper and the heroine (?) Was too hasty at the beginning. Even though Jasper is not the hero, I thought that Jasper's character was already in the book and he was very wary. Therefore, it was unreasonable for the author's Jasper to bring the heroine with him at the beginning just because of her blood problem, and the character was slightly broken. Let's not talk about the characters, just the plot. The author could actually add something during the time when they rely on each other and help each other. I guess that the first love with Jasper was actually the purest. This love passed so quickly that he could die for the other later, which was very baffling. His relationship with A Luo is also equally unclear. These are suggestions for relationships. In fact, I also had these problems when writing articles before. I thought that the pain, love, friendship, hatred of the characters... Were portrayed very deeply. In fact, when looking at it from the other side, many parts are unclear and the expressions are not smooth. It can be written better, and the more changes will be made, the better. There are also authors who failed to describe Lucius in the HP world (that is definitely not the "Platinum Noble Peacock Dad" in my mind), and some characteristics of the Snake King (you know) were not found at all. There is a question: "Is this a professor?" In fact, there is a lot to write about in the HP world, such as: Narcissa's entanglement, Voldemort's inexplicable closeness (Voldemort is by no means an unsuspecting person) The most important thing is, Lily! Homosexuality can be written beautifully. When I saw Narcissa's "Why does my heart hurt" (I think it was this sentence) at the end of the article, I felt like oh my god! You're kidding, it's too abrupt. The foreshadowing can be appropriate in the previous article, and readers will have a vague guess that this kind of love will be beautiful! In short, the author's writing will be better, I believe. (Again, this is not a provocation, just a suggestion) ps my first long review pps The author's subject matter is very novel and his imagination is rich.
The author is perverted! The article is rubbish! It's so meaningless! Don't waste everyone's time by writing articles in the future
Comrades who have not jumped into the trap, I sincerely recommend that you stop jumping into the trap. This article is too capricious and inconsistent.
It's weird, appendix, the relationship between Narcissa and Aro is not clear, it's a bad ending, and the reason why the heroine died is not even written.
Feel free to write it boldly... It's good that Arrow is the male protagonist... At that time, Jasper and the female protagonist were separated, which was actually missed, and now there are Alice and the Cullens in the middle... There should be no better choice for the two of them besides friends...
Not bad, but I feel like the later pictures are a bit confusing.
All the feelings can only turn into a long sigh, hey~