____Yang Lianting runs rampant in the Divine Cult, ordering Dongfang Bubai around. Is he really only using him, with no feelings at all?
____Dongfang Bubai caters to Yang Lianting and lowers himself before him. Is he truly content, with no regrets?
____If someone appeared who was willing to treat him gently and cherish him like a treasure, where would Dongfang Bubai's heart turn?
____Does love have to be tender and lingering, beneath the flowers and moonlight? Can a rough, uncouth brute really not fall in love?
____When everything starts over, when things can take a different turn, who will be the one left behind and forgotten?
The entire story is currently being revised. The main changes are to the wording, along with a few added plot details. The aim is to flesh out the characters, smooth out the story, and finally get around to writing the extra chapters I've been putting off. The overall direction of the story won't change, but some chapters may not line up for a while.
I hope you'll support me, point out mistakes, and share plenty of feedback! ^-^
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A favorite article, I have read it many times. When I first watched it, I felt that it was abridged. It took me a long time to find the unabridged version, but it was not easy to find it. In the original work, Liandong and Liandong only appeared in one chapter and then ended. There is a lot of room to develop their specific character interactions. The characters and interactions between Dongfang and Yang Lianting in this article are the closest to the original work in my opinion. There are too many stories in the fanfic about Yang Lianting being greedy for life and fearing death, hiding his love from Dongfang and taking concubines. This article is simply a breath of fresh air. I can only say one thing about Dongfang and Yang Lianting's relationship issues in the original novel. If a man doesn't like a man, he will never be able to do it. Don't think that everyone is gay because his physiological reactions cannot be faked. If you are greedy for life and afraid of death, this is definitely not true if you look closely at the original work. In the original work, the fake leader Bao in the main hall was beaten and frightened. On the other hand, Yang Lianting was knocked unconscious and forcibly woken up, and his leg was broken without begging for mercy. He was even praised by Xiang Wentian as a good man, and the narrator also praised Yang Lianting for being extremely tough. This is an obviously contrasting description. If Mr. Jin wanted to describe Yang Lianting, a minor supporting character who appeared in one chapter, who was greedy for life and afraid of death, he would not write it like this, nor would he praise Xiang Wentian. Instead, he would directly write that Yang Lianting was beaten, knelt down, begged for mercy, and revealed the whereabouts of Dongfang to reflect the ugliness of the character. Because from a literary point of view, such a small supporting character will not write too much ink, such as a paragraph that first highlights and then suppresses, and will only use very short words to create the character as much as possible. Obviously, Jin Yong was definitely not greedy for life and afraid of death when he wrote the character Yang Lianting. Later, when Yang Lianting watched the battle, the original work said, "Watching the battle attentively, with a face full of concern." Since Yang is not greedy for life and fear of death, Yang is so concerned because of Dongfang. The same is true for the scene where Ren Yingying chopped off his finger. Jin Yong had very little ink but it also reflected the character's characteristics. After understanding the original work, reading this article is like having a state banquet. Dongfang Yang Lianting and even Tang Shen are very unique in this article. Dongfang will not completely accommodate Yang Lianting. He has his own small ideas, such as not giving Yang Heimu Ling and not letting Yang Sha do whatever he wants. When he thinks of it, he will fight with Linghu Chong and others in an upright manner to settle the regretful grudges from his past life. It's quite interesting that Yang Lianting likes Dongfang but won't say it out loud so it's awkward. Tang Shen is also not as real as Long Aotian, the time traveler. This article has two major ups and downs, Tang Shen's insertion and Yang's desire for offspring. I think the setting is quite good. Tang Shen's insertion makes Dongfang understand what he wants. The in-depth plot also explains Dongfang Yang Lianting's misunderstandings in his previous life and this life; the plot of Yang's desire for offspring makes Yang Lianting give up the idea of staying after the offspring and choose his lover later, and realizes that his love is more important than his offspring, which is a good promotion. The result of these two plot ups and downs was that the relationship between the two deepened, and the misunderstandings were resolved. By the end, the relationship between Dongfang and Yang was already unbreakable, which perfectly describes the saying that abuse is for the sake of better sweetness. The writing is really good, the process is rough and tumble, and the ending is satisfying.
It's really rare to see a non-travel article about the original Yang Lianting First of all, in fact, in this article, when I saw Tang Shen, I felt my balls hurt for a while, but at the same time, I felt that the author's understanding of Tang Shen was very good. It is true that many time-travelers written by the author looked at the characters in the work with the attitude of reading a book. I feel that after traveling through the past, many time-travelers did not regard those characters as real people, but only used a one-sided view and a prejudiced eye to view the characters in the book. Of course, what I said is not absolute. Apart from the original author, the only people who can truly understand the psychology of the characters in the work are themselves. Secondly, probably because of the influence of Xu Laoguai's version of Dongfang, I have some different views on some details of Dongfang described by the author. However, I still like the author's portrayal of the relationship between Dongfang and Yang Lianting and their love. I'm not very good at writing comments, and I'm too lazy to write them. I couldn't help but say a few words after reading this article today. The author hit my cute point. I feel that thousands of words can only be combined into one "good article", especially the description of the time traveler. It really hit the point. So many people hate Tang Shen. I'm afraid it's because Tang Shen is not the protagonist? There are many original character x Dongfang novels, and how many of them have protagonists who are not like Tang Shen. The author's feelings for Yang Lianting Dongfang touched my heart. I really don't know what to say, but I can only comment on this Tang Shen... What's more worthy of praise is that the length of the article is just right, and there is no sloppiness to make V money. Anyway, author, I want to confess to you! Love this article so much! The above comments are purely personal opinions~
I rarely read such short novels, but after reading the setting, I couldn't help but click in. I couldn't stop, and I read it in one sitting in a very tired state. At the beginning, I also specifically checked the original work, and found no evidence that Yang Lianting was flirting with women, nor did I find any description of his false love for the leader, especially the fact that he did not say a word even after his leg was broken. It is really difficult to connect him with the garbage images in some fan fiction. In this article, I feel that Yang Lianting and Dongfang Bubai are the most reasonable and real. Their love, their way of getting along, and their characters are just like what they are. The only failure was that Dongfang Bubai easily decided to be with the time-travelling girl, and was too ruthless towards Yang Lianting, even saying that he would let you do whatever he wanted.
Although it has been finished for a while, I still want to make a sequel
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