"Ah! Goddess of the Nile! Please bring your daughter back!"
"Ah! Goddess Ishtar! Please bring the Daughter of the Nile back!"
Why are you all going on about this? Don't you know it's all fake?
Menfuisu is a shrewd ruler!
Izumi isn't as devoted as the stories claim!
What a joke!
How is Su Lin, a shut-in forced to transmigrate, supposed to survive in such a sensible Nile world?
Give me back my ridiculous Nile world!
P.S. I've been writing this for a long time. Since this is my first story, the heroine is inevitably a Mary Sue: naive, saintly, and generally annoying in all sorts of ways. After revising it, I originally wanted to write a normal heroine, but lately I've become obsessed with this type. ╰( ̄▽ ̄)╮ Feel free to skim it!
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People say this is a story where the heroine follows the BOSS through the plot while making all kinds of sarcastic comments in her head. "Falling in Love with Yan Tieyi" ← If you like this, take a look!
"The Condor Heroes: A Breeze Through the Peach Blossoms" ← A story about a cold, aloof man and a working girl. I originally meant to write a story about saving someone, but then realized the girl was the one being saved ╮(╯▽╰)╭
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How can I see the full text without deletion? Hope payment is made to express sincerity
Wonderful, I didn't expect to be able to re-understand the comic Daughter of the Nile in a different way~ Looking forward to your new work, Fei Da~ Come on~
When I see this kind of article that the author has deep intentions and makes me very troubled, I can't help but want to write a long review... But in fact, I don't know how long it can be... The behavior of the heroine often makes me feel very aggrieved. I think to myself, why should I ask for trouble and read such a cowardly story? However, the heroine is just an ordinary person. What she has is what a cautious ordinary person has. Her foresight, her untimely soft-heartedness, her hesitation at the end of the matter, her struggles and contradictions are all because she is an ordinary person. What if she could really turn over the rain and turn the clouds over with ease? And this is also the success of character creation. If it is not profound, it will not make people hate it helplessly. But the fact that the bond was cut off after a hundred chapters or so is still too tiring to love... But the Izumi fanfic makes me feel like it's from a fairy tale? The tenderness and sweetness on the surface are far from pure and beautiful behind the scenes. It may be a show, an exaggeration, or they may just use each other. The heroine's wisdom in some aspects seems to have suddenly improved a lot, and she has become a transparent woman who is good at pretending to be stupid but sometimes cowardly. However, he is obviously getting more and more excited and can't help it, but always pretends not to care. In this extra story, almost everyone is evil [Manual Goodbye] All I can say is that it's Izmi's fault! However, the world of slave owners is not as beautiful as a fairy tale. Let the heroine continue to dream and Izmi continue to deceive herself and others. It is gratifying and gratifying. P. S. I haven't read the rest of the article yet, and I don't know if my interpretation is correct. Anyway, let's get it out of the way first. I wish the author to write more wonderful works!
I used to be a fan of the Daughters of the Nile comic book. I'm really happy to see a fan of this story. Please continue to work hard. Also, I also like Izmi very much. Please write more extras.
Why is the prince so calm from Izmi's perspective? Has he fallen in love with the heroine~_~
Come on, actually rewriting the whole text is something that only a lot of courage can do.
I like it very much, love it a lot, come on
Congratulations on the completion, flowers~\\(≧▽≦)/~
It's okay. I'm glad to see you didn't give up.
Why hasn't it been updated yet? Isn't it a scam? I've been waiting for a long time to come see it every day. Do you want to inform me earlier? Although I have been diving, some people still read your articles, and I paid for them! Please give me a good ending!