The writing is good and the title is interesting.
It is important that the beginning is not as attractive as the title.
It's a web article, after all, it needs some visual stimulation, but it doesn't have a cliché opening chapter.
Keep up the good work
The writing style gives people a fresh feeling, and the descriptions are just right. It is worth reading. Support!
GN seems to have written it very carefully. How should I put it? GN himself noticed the problem at the beginning of the article. You may have to write this way for the development of the article, but you can always write it more perfectly. Come on GN.
The writing is natural and worth reading.
Waiting and watching.
Well, I hope Guliang will change the ellipsis to a regular one. Many people will click X when they see punctuation used indiscriminately. I was about to click X just now, but I couldn't resist reading after seeing a familiar nickname in the comment below.
It's actually quite well written.
Another word: sapphire blue—sapphire blue?
There was too much nonsense in the first chapter, and I felt that the author had written too much prose... There was only half of the plot in one chapter, and the rest were all unnecessary descriptions... But the poster said it would get better later on, so I continued reading. . I suggest you revise the first few chapters. .
Lots of encouragement, strong support, come on
Bishui LZ is here to collect the article~~I think the writing style is pretty good~~Please accept it first and read it slowly~Come on O(∩_∩)O~
The desire for people to watch is not very strong. GN~Should we be more restrained in describing scenery?
The slow-burning novel is very good. Come on, the author~~Spread flowers~~
It's really, really, really powerful. My friend is a writer!!
The writing is good and the title is interesting. It is important that the beginning is not as attractive as the title. It's a web article, after all, it needs some visual stimulation, but it doesn't have a cliché opening chapter. Keep up the good work
The writing style gives people a fresh feeling, and the descriptions are just right. It is worth reading. Support!
GN seems to have written it very carefully. How should I put it? GN himself noticed the problem at the beginning of the article. You may have to write this way for the development of the article, but you can always write it more perfectly. Come on GN.
The writing is natural and worth reading. Waiting and watching. Well, I hope Guliang will change the ellipsis to a regular one. Many people will click X when they see punctuation used indiscriminately. I was about to click X just now, but I couldn't resist reading after seeing a familiar nickname in the comment below. It's actually quite well written. Another word: sapphire blue—sapphire blue?
There was too much nonsense in the first chapter, and I felt that the author had written too much prose... There was only half of the plot in one chapter, and the rest were all unnecessary descriptions... But the poster said it would get better later on, so I continued reading. . I suggest you revise the first few chapters. .
Lots of encouragement, strong support, come on
Bishui LZ is here to collect the article~~I think the writing style is pretty good~~Please accept it first and read it slowly~Come on O(∩_∩)O~
The desire for people to watch is not very strong. GN~Should we be more restrained in describing scenery?
The slow-burning novel is very good. Come on, the author~~Spread flowers~~
It's really, really, really powerful. My friend is a writer!!