Thanks to Foxy's Hand-Drawing Studio, and special thanks to Mint. I'm so charmed, I'm hiding my face.
Chu Yuan entered the Main God Space with a gunshot wound, determined to find himself a wife there. He dreams of killing Chu Xuan, but somehow can never bring himself to do it. His favorite pastime is dreaming, though Zhang Jie often brings him back to earth. His moods swing wildly, but really, he just lacks a sense of security. And the author dreams of being buried alive under a pile of comments, but... well...
A story with a shou protagonist.
Ships: Chu Xuan x Chu Yuan
Liu Bian x Chu Lin (psycho Liu Bian x Dad Chu, possibly a tragic romance...)
Demon Zhao Zhuikong x Demon Zheng Zha
P.S. I like every single character, but it seems like I could ruin any one of them.
P.P.S. I'm hopeless at writing Chu Xuan. Strategic battles and all that... hiding my face, turning around. Anyway, don't get your hopes up.
P.P.P.S. Unless something unexpected comes up, I'll update daily or every other day during the holidays. No backlog, no outline. I'll do my best once school starts.
P.P.P.P.S. I have a terrible memory and might forget what I've written myself. Feel free to point out any mistakes (*^__^*) Hehe...
It's been a year since I took the exam. When will I be back?
That phrase 'Chu Xuan, brother' is so loving! ! ! !
I can only say that if this kind of setting is developed well, it will be absolutely sadistic.
But based on what I've seen so far, I can only say that the author may not have had this intention.
By the way, when I read Chapter 26, I was wondering whether to abandon the article because of the reasons J mentioned.
——The disappointment with the portrayal of the protagonist is a small part of the reason. The dislike of the protagonist or Chu Xuan's father is a small part of the reason. The disgust for the protagonist's annoying pseudo-father is a big part of the reason (of course this will be a very good and bloody point of abuse, but after seeing the extra chapter in Chapter 25, I suddenly felt unworthy of the protagonist)
I can't say that Chu Xuan is at fault, after all, he has no emotions, but at least Chu Xuan here doesn't make me cute at all.
Although I know it's unfair to say this to the protagonist, since he doesn't know anything about it, I still subconsciously feel that it's a bit cheap for him to put it upside down (sorry, no offense, I just can't think of a more suitable adjective to express my feelings)
The extra chapter in Chapter 25 can't explain anything about the future, but I still wonder if the protagonist knew about it at that time. If I already know how sad I am and still..., Then I can only say sorry that I don't get along with this article...
Of course, Baozi, you can keep the protagonist secret for a lifetime - it's not difficult to do this considering the IQ difference between Chu Xuan and the protagonist. You can also set the protagonist to be so stupid that he doesn't mind if he continues to control his father. He is born to be such a foolish child with wishful thinking (I don't know why he suddenly thought of Qiong Yao) - that's your freedom, Baozi, and as a reader, I have no right to comment.
I can only say that father control is a cute attribute, but I have never been so disgusted with a father control. If you want to control, control him, so he is at least a normal father. Anyway, I hate Chu Lin in Baozi's novel. I hate the whole house and the whole family, and the Liu pervert is ranked second.
In addition, I didn't see the lack of security mentioned in the copy at all. I didn't see it at all. I just saw a naughty kid who jumped happily and occasionally lacked oxygen to his brain.
Above
I won't read this article anymore. I'll save it to see the follow-up development. If you don't feel nauseated, continue reading. If... Then quietly abandon the article~
The above is just my personal opinion. Please don't pinch me. I'm a good boy and I'll give you two points~
Take the exam well~~ Be prepared to be tricked every time you read my limited articles... Le Fan is still a few months away and there will be no updates for a year...
Just reading this chapter, you will think that the CP should be Su Lan
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
It's been a year since I took the exam. When will I be back?
That phrase 'Chu Xuan, brother' is so loving! ! ! !
I can only say that if this kind of setting is developed well, it will be absolutely sadistic. But based on what I've seen so far, I can only say that the author may not have had this intention. By the way, when I read Chapter 26, I was wondering whether to abandon the article because of the reasons J mentioned. ——The disappointment with the portrayal of the protagonist is a small part of the reason. The dislike of the protagonist or Chu Xuan's father is a small part of the reason. The disgust for the protagonist's annoying pseudo-father is a big part of the reason (of course this will be a very good and bloody point of abuse, but after seeing the extra chapter in Chapter 25, I suddenly felt unworthy of the protagonist) I can't say that Chu Xuan is at fault, after all, he has no emotions, but at least Chu Xuan here doesn't make me cute at all. Although I know it's unfair to say this to the protagonist, since he doesn't know anything about it, I still subconsciously feel that it's a bit cheap for him to put it upside down (sorry, no offense, I just can't think of a more suitable adjective to express my feelings) The extra chapter in Chapter 25 can't explain anything about the future, but I still wonder if the protagonist knew about it at that time. If I already know how sad I am and still..., Then I can only say sorry that I don't get along with this article... Of course, Baozi, you can keep the protagonist secret for a lifetime - it's not difficult to do this considering the IQ difference between Chu Xuan and the protagonist. You can also set the protagonist to be so stupid that he doesn't mind if he continues to control his father. He is born to be such a foolish child with wishful thinking (I don't know why he suddenly thought of Qiong Yao) - that's your freedom, Baozi, and as a reader, I have no right to comment. I can only say that father control is a cute attribute, but I have never been so disgusted with a father control. If you want to control, control him, so he is at least a normal father. Anyway, I hate Chu Lin in Baozi's novel. I hate the whole house and the whole family, and the Liu pervert is ranked second. In addition, I didn't see the lack of security mentioned in the copy at all. I didn't see it at all. I just saw a naughty kid who jumped happily and occasionally lacked oxygen to his brain. Above I won't read this article anymore. I'll save it to see the follow-up development. If you don't feel nauseated, continue reading. If... Then quietly abandon the article~ The above is just my personal opinion. Please don't pinch me. I'm a good boy and I'll give you two points~
Take the exam well~~ Be prepared to be tricked every time you read my limited articles... Le Fan is still a few months away and there will be no updates for a year...
Just reading this chapter, you will think that the CP should be Su Lan
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.
Although Chu Lin died, the person he loved loved him, and his death was deserved; Liu Bian, like Liu Bian, sacrificed others for love, but at least the feelings he gave were reciprocated; even if Chu Xuan did not have the emotions and consciousness of normal people, it would be resolved later, and he had the true affection and favor that Chu Yuan could not ask for since he was born. Where is Chu Yuan? Nothing! Father's love and master's love are all fake! One wanted him to be Chu Xuan's substitute, and the other wanted to make Chu Lin's life easier. Even when the two of them died, they were thinking about Chu Xuan, the son they truly loved, and using every ounce of residual value of Chu Yuan. When I think about Chu Yuan being plotted by Chu Xuan in the future, and even really living and dying for him, I feel angry and sad. The family affection that can never be obtained, the unequal love (Chu Xuan is sure in his heart that even if he loves him, it is only limited), I don't want to read it.