Heart Demon

I'm so happy to see the update of Inner Demon, I've been waiting for it for a year. Yuyu takes his articles very seriously. He will continue to improve the previous chapters. I read the updated parts again. Now the plot has stopped at a heartbreaking place. I hope nothing really happens to Mo Xin. It will take many opportunities to resolve the emotional conflict between him and Yun Ge. Pei Hongyu, who is between the two, does not know how Yu will deal with it. It would be nice if it had a heartwarming ending. I didn't really like the character Pei Hongyu from the beginning, even though he was still a good young man at that time~ Haha, maybe it's because Yunge is too charming and eye-catching. But looking at this character now, I find it interesting. His inner transformation and twisting process caused a major twist in the plot, and the character was portrayed very vividly.

The author's writing style is very good, and the narrative aspect of this article has improved compared to the article a few years ago. It's just that I feel a sense of alienation from the author's protagonists and stories in all his articles. When I read the article, I feel like I'm just reading the article. I can't get involved, let alone be immersed in it. Of course, Mary Su Wen is also annoying, but Mary Su Wen has its own fans. It doesn't have to be good, as long as it is good enough for Su Wen... However, a story like this from a completely bystander perspective needs a lot of plot to enrich it. However, after seeing all the current stories, the suspense aspect is a bit weak and cannot lead people to delve deeper. The same is true for this article. Probably the only thing I want to know is who the other two saints are... My hunch is that it is soy sauce. As for the emotional line..., Can I say that I am not entangled at all... I still like the author's "Bad Life" on HJJ the most. It's an old article from 2005. It can be considered unique!

I just finished reading "Bad Life" on HJJ today and found this place. I was just thinking about the article from 6 years ago and I didn't know if the author was still there. I came here and found that there was an update from last month on a bunch of old holes... It's too late today, I'll take a closer look tomorrow. By the way, author, why don't you move "Bad Life" over? After all, it's the final article.