Qingqing? Cough~~ I'm dizzy. Why is it the same as my name (real name)?
But I'm much more nymphomaniac than her
I came here from Xiaoyu.
After reading the article, now sprinkle some flowers~~
Wow, Chengcheng's writing is indeed very good! Sure enough, there is Gu Long Da Xia...
The writing is very relaxed, but the only flaw seems to be that it lacks a bit of suspense. I knew from the beginning that this man would definitely die...
However, this girl killed someone for the sake of killing people, which surprised me.
Great article!
Personal opinion: It might be better to add some environmental description in the middle and combine it with the tense and bloody atmosphere at that time. It is well written.
It does smell a bit like cologne, haha~
What is "beauty"?
Literally, it is usually interpreted like this: "beautiful woman."
But why can't it be a "beautiful man"?
This is interesting, that is, it would not be bad to have a handsome man to make the sisters become nymphomaniacs!
A sword like flowing water.
Looking at the paintings of mountains and flowing water is fate.
Seeing the sword moving in the clouds and flowing water is also fate.
It's so picturesque! The elegant figure and beautiful appearance are truly one of a kind!
Ah, Xiao Pocheng's personality is very easy to like, at least it looks like it here.
Although he seems to be cunning
Although he seems incoherent
Although he kinda drives whoever he talks to crazy
But I'm just a reader
No matter how cunning you are, no matter how incoherent you speak, it will drive people crazy.
But I'm just a reader
Readers have the right to prefer the protagonist. Readers can support their favorite characters.
Wow
I'm flattered by Chengcheng's praise. It's worth saying something. Although I don't drink alcohol, I can use boiled water instead.
A sword like flowing water.
Looking at the paintings of mountains and flowing water is fate.
Seeing the sword moving in the clouds and flowing water is also fate.
A bit cologne and stylish. Hehe--
Leave a paw print and float away
Qingqing? Cough~~ I'm dizzy. Why is it the same as my name (real name)? But I'm much more nymphomaniac than her
I came here from Xiaoyu. After reading the article, now sprinkle some flowers~~
Wow, Chengcheng's writing is indeed very good! Sure enough, there is Gu Long Da Xia... The writing is very relaxed, but the only flaw seems to be that it lacks a bit of suspense. I knew from the beginning that this man would definitely die... However, this girl killed someone for the sake of killing people, which surprised me. Great article!
Personal opinion: It might be better to add some environmental description in the middle and combine it with the tense and bloody atmosphere at that time. It is well written.
It does smell a bit like cologne, haha~
What is "beauty"? Literally, it is usually interpreted like this: "beautiful woman." But why can't it be a "beautiful man"? This is interesting, that is, it would not be bad to have a handsome man to make the sisters become nymphomaniacs! A sword like flowing water. Looking at the paintings of mountains and flowing water is fate. Seeing the sword moving in the clouds and flowing water is also fate. It's so picturesque! The elegant figure and beautiful appearance are truly one of a kind!
Ah, Xiao Pocheng's personality is very easy to like, at least it looks like it here. Although he seems to be cunning Although he seems incoherent Although he kinda drives whoever he talks to crazy But I'm just a reader No matter how cunning you are, no matter how incoherent you speak, it will drive people crazy. But I'm just a reader Readers have the right to prefer the protagonist. Readers can support their favorite characters.
Wow I'm flattered by Chengcheng's praise. It's worth saying something. Although I don't drink alcohol, I can use boiled water instead.
A sword like flowing water. Looking at the paintings of mountains and flowing water is fate. Seeing the sword moving in the clouds and flowing water is also fate. A bit cologne and stylish. Hehe--