Ginny's Sister

If you don't know how to write, don't write! The writing sucks! All original characters are disgusting! The writing is so bad and you don't realize it, but it's V?! Author, how thick-skinned are you?!! The characters you write about are all very poorly educated and very thick-skinned. Is it because you, the author, are also so thick-skinned?! I advise the author not to write articles in the future, it is a waste of everyone's time!!!!!!!!!!!! Please find a way to lock this article. Readers who have already read it will be unlucky. For the sake of the lucky readers who haven't read it yet, please lock the article decisively!!!!!!!!

The theme of the building is good, but your writing style is really not complimentable. Except for the heroine, most of the plot is copied from Harry Potter, and the ending is very hasty, which ruins the writing direction.

Is this the end? It sucks?

Oh, let's spread the flowers. I don't like the heroine's family background. Dad, come on.

The heroine is really annoying! Can't bear it

Master... You know too much. Even Skeeter knows that he is an illegal Animagus. You will be silenced, ╮(╯▽╰)╭

Slytherin's lounge is originally in the basement, so why "go downstairs"?

Hey, I really think, Junior Uncle Hongwen, if you keep shouting like this, one day the professor will overturn the table.

There is a sentence repeated~!

The writing style is childish, and the characters are a bit too broken. It's fair to use it as a writing practice, but to be honest, I don't think this is fan fiction, it's just a story.