Loveless

There are so many quotation marks - -

Dear bell!!!! I love you so much!!!! It's so well written that I feel ashamed…

Well written~~ Come on, Ling~~ Hee hee

I don't want a cameo like thisKeep up the good work!

I really like the ending~~~The content is also good~~~Come on~!!!

To be honest, you can tell it's a children's work just by looking at it. I think you are only 18 or 19 at most, and you may not be able to reach that age yet. Your article contains too little editing and detailed description, and too many quotation marks ~ these will make people feel monotonous. Although your writing style is very good, you still don't understand the world ~ so what you write is not yet formed. Keep up the good work~

I can't understand it. . .

Support the bell~~~HOHO~piao. Looking forward to your new work~~HOHO!